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offeringservice26
1/9/24, 3:59 AM
Thank you for one of the best and hottest stories I’ve ever read on this site or anywhere else! I have a few stray, not particularly organized thoughts that address the other comments more than the story itself. I hope you’re not feeling deflated by any of the comments regarding the way it ends. I personally enjoyed it quite a lot. And I hope you’ll note that not one of them criticizes your writing in the least, which remains thoroughly impeccable. Perhaps it would be a bit more palatable to the detractors if viewed through the lens of an epilogue rather than a last chapter. If one accepts the presuppositions of the story (that this type of profound behavior-changing hypnosis is real, that someone like Alex might actually exist, etc.) then this conclusion is the logical outcome of the story. Alex suddenly developing true romantic feelings towards Tommy and freeing him from his mental control isn’t the real Alex, it’s a new character instead. Tommy being released from his hypnosis and embracing a “new Tommy” that’s a natural pussyboy negates the premise of hypnotic control. And on and on. In a sense the reactions of people who wanted a “good” ending reminds me of the mentality of all the flakes that pervade sites like Recon. They sit around masturbating to chats about being a “slave” or TPE but as soon as the discussion starts veering towards serious consequences of those arrangements (unconditional relocation, fianancial transfers, occupational changes, various social isolations, on and on) — poof! Suddenly the masturbators are gone, never to be heard from again. Deep down they just want the fantasy, not the reality which might have genuinely unpleasant consequences. Ok, I’ll wrap up this rant. I hope no one feels overly attacked reading this, this is just my personal perspective on the way the story ended. Fantastic story from A to Z bud. Truly an all-time great.
1/9/24, 2:16 AM
that was a very satisfying read, i couldn't last the whole way through it hit me so hard
1/9/24, 12:50 AM
Really enjoyed this. Would like to have had more details on their sexual activity on the cruise. Hope you write more.
1/8/24, 11:18 PM
While reworked, the truth remains as Daymion pointed out. There is so much eroticism and depth to the world and the characters. The chapters pull me in whether it's actual Coins using their pets in some fashion, or with hints at how the society works and the undertones that go along with such a hypersexual culture. The build up and tease of Jasper falling into accepting that pet status -- nudged along certainly -- to be wanting it and seeing his mixed feelings about that feels really solid and I'm always eager for more of this world. Great job on the re-work. Like the chapters before, you're elevating an already great story into a tight, focused narrative for plot points and characters alike.
1/8/24, 8:24 PM
Short and sweet. I’m having a good time reading through your stories!

1/8/24, 11:12 PM
@[Derek Williams](/user/show/175661) Nice to hear people still enjoy some of my older stories!
1/8/24, 9:22 PM
I was hoping theres actual intercourse or sex scenes included in the chapter or what actual happened during the cruise but thats alright. Its still a good read.
1/8/24, 8:34 PM
Oh man, this chapter is so great and so hot. And that switcheroo at the end, Felix being sex drunk instead of Evan. Looking forward for the next chapter.
1/8/24, 7:15 PM
This is *fascinating*. I love seeing deconstructions like this, and I'm definitely looking forward to more.

1/8/24, 7:37 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) Thank you! I'll try my best to update regularly :)
1/8/24, 1:17 AM
Why is this not also on Cupid? Love it.

Martin
1/8/24, 5:44 AM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Agreed. Stories like this should be cross-posted to Cupid as well. That server always needs more love :)

1/8/24, 6:26 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) After I started writing, this story has taken quite a different direction than I anticipated - I've updated to publish it to Cupid as well.

Martin
1/8/24, 7:11 PM
@[Amero](/user/show/10014920) :thumbsup:
Hurricane
1/8/24, 6:51 PM
Love where this is going. I really enjoy the normal postings on gss, but this lends a lovely little sparkle to a wonderful "room"