Recent Comments

1/8/24, 11:18 PM
While reworked, the truth remains as Daymion pointed out. There is so much eroticism and depth to the world and the characters. The chapters pull me in whether it's actual Coins using their pets in some fashion, or with hints at how the society works and the undertones that go along with such a hypersexual culture. The build up and tease of Jasper falling into accepting that pet status -- nudged along certainly -- to be wanting it and seeing his mixed feelings about that feels really solid and I'm always eager for more of this world. Great job on the re-work. Like the chapters before, you're elevating an already great story into a tight, focused narrative for plot points and characters alike.
1/8/24, 8:24 PM
Short and sweet. I’m having a good time reading through your stories!

1/8/24, 11:12 PM
@[Derek Williams](/user/show/175661) Nice to hear people still enjoy some of my older stories!
1/8/24, 9:22 PM
I was hoping theres actual intercourse or sex scenes included in the chapter or what actual happened during the cruise but thats alright. Its still a good read.
1/8/24, 8:34 PM
Oh man, this chapter is so great and so hot. And that switcheroo at the end, Felix being sex drunk instead of Evan. Looking forward for the next chapter.
1/8/24, 7:15 PM
This is *fascinating*. I love seeing deconstructions like this, and I'm definitely looking forward to more.

1/8/24, 7:37 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) Thank you! I'll try my best to update regularly :)
1/8/24, 1:17 AM
Why is this not also on Cupid? Love it.

Martin
1/8/24, 5:44 AM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Agreed. Stories like this should be cross-posted to Cupid as well. That server always needs more love :)

1/8/24, 6:26 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) After I started writing, this story has taken quite a different direction than I anticipated - I've updated to publish it to Cupid as well.

Martin
1/8/24, 7:11 PM
@[Amero](/user/show/10014920) :thumbsup:
Hurricane
1/8/24, 6:51 PM
Love where this is going. I really enjoy the normal postings on gss, but this lends a lovely little sparkle to a wonderful "room"
1/8/24, 4:22 PM
I totally enjoyed this chapter. It is equally hot and hilarious. It is nice to read Father learning to be at least good at sex. And that final scene is just so good.
1/8/24, 2:43 PM
a lovely story :) looking for the next chapter
1/8/24, 11:30 AM
Rereading it I just noticed Rugby Boy.

1/8/24, 12:30 PM
@[TexMuscle](/user/show/10002223) I'd forgotten about this cameo. I thought I was creating a shared universe with book 3 "The Centaur's Journey", where Wolf Murdock from POLLINATION: The Series plays a significant role. As a matter of fact, the end of events in PHOLUS 3 begin Wolf's journey in POLLINATION