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1/6/24, 9:34 AM
Hot. Can't wait to read more.

1/9/24, 1:39 PM
@Flamefox23 Glad you enjoyed it!
1/9/24, 12:56 PM
This is so good! I love Larry and the Left Warehouse is very near and dear to my heart.

1/9/24, 1:39 PM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) Larry is definitely a keeper! Thanks for reading.
Zander
1/9/24, 11:11 AM
I liked the chapter as well as the Main Character (I like people with brains). I'm really looking forward to the confrontation with the Doctor and the other hypnotist villains (when they all want Tony but can't do it)
Anonymous
1/9/24, 10:44 AM
Man, its 2024 already. You finished chapter14 yets?
Zander
1/9/24, 10:42 AM
Thank you for the story. I have been waiting for a long time for someone to write something like this. I hope the continuation of the story will not be long in coming and we will see many chapters.
1/9/24, 7:21 AM
This was hot and made me realize how much I missed these stories.
1/8/24, 10:56 PM
Fun and interesting story. Can't wait to see how it goes. Reminds me of a story on here where mc does his best not to fall for any of the hypnosis stuff.

1/9/24, 6:56 AM
@Flamefox23 I'm really inspired by my favorite authors here: Elmara (my ultimate favorite smut author in the site), Willie Cici (mostly his earlier stories centered around twunky bottoms protagonists), Nocturne13, Rotherhaman's 'Born to be Bred' series, Adonis' 'Lust's #1 Gamer' series, z119z, and gymmuscle's 'The Change' series They write really great stories here and I think I draw a LOT of inspiration from them Thank you for you kind reply :)
Lavender Lad
1/8/24, 8:04 PM
I didn't like how too many words were just dedicated to the pov character going "hmm I saw this in my favorite gay hypno smut before" to the point of redundancy instead of using his knowledge of being in a story to his advantage, it really takes you out of the action. other than that I am really liking the idea and looking forward to the next chapter, hopefully many fluff scenes between Brad and Tony!

1/9/24, 6:46 AM
@[Lavender Lad](/user/show/10019272) Fluffy, yes, but after lots of build-up And yes, the exposition of my MC is a bit jarring but I'm unironically trying to emulate light novels (at least the trashy ones) and self-insert fics. But I hope I'm gonna improve on this because plot is gonna happen next Thank you for the constructive critique :)
Zander
1/7/24, 9:39 PM
It's a great story, but for some reason the pictures don't open.

Willie Cici
1/8/24, 3:55 AM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) I wrote this story months ago. By the time I posted the stories, Tumbler removed them. Sorry about. I'll edit them out.

Martin
1/8/24, 5:40 AM
@Willie Cici Why don't you upload them to our server and directly embed#d them directly into your stories? Then you're not depending on external servers for the images.

Willie CIci
1/9/24, 3:06 AM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) I have to learn how to do that. Thanks.

Martin
1/9/24, 6:20 AM
@Willie CIci Let me know if you want assistance. I'm always here to help. Also, right above the text editor in the story submission dialog, there is a link called "Adding images to your story", which explains the process.
1/9/24, 1:45 AM
This was really hot! Thank you so much for sharing this with us <3

1/9/24, 5:45 AM
@[timpu713](/user/show/10045954) Thanks. It was fun to write. And sharing is fun.