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1/8/24, 3:16 AM
Fun story! I did not see the alien invasion twist coming at all.

Willie Cici
1/8/24, 3:52 AM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) I'm glad you like it. The upcoming chapters chronicle Adam's cross-country trek.
Anonymous
1/7/24, 9:46 PM
this is so hot and sexy! what do the aliens mean by the men becoming hosts? are the black suits the aliens themselves?

Willie Cici
1/8/24, 3:50 AM
@Anonymous The black rubber suits are alien. They are getting the planet ready to "takeover" the hosts.
Feb 4, 2023
1/8/24, 3:45 AM
Hot. I’ve been leaning into my love for pink. If this salon was near me, I’d definitely get my hair done there. Jakie isn’t really my type… but that could change.
1/8/24, 3:08 AM
Loved this series, even if I thought the ending was a bit sad.
1/8/24, 3:03 AM
Love the romance aspect. As much as I hate comparing someone's fine work to a popular trend, this reminds me of _Heartstopper_. Edging for more!
1/8/24, 2:46 AM
Great as always! Nobody does mass enslavement better than you! Love the bit about rubbing briefs together. Something about that is wayyy HOT!
1/8/24, 2:31 AM
Glad to see this is back. If my memory don't play tricks to me, you added a few more details here and there, isn't it? I'm excited to read the next one, Kyle is my favourite Lantern.
1/7/24, 8:08 AM
That was fantastic! A perfect package of horny gym bros, a hot twink and some mind-altering hoodoo with a great twist at the end. I love your stories and this was another great addition!

1/7/24, 11:27 PM
@[Ruffcub](/user/show/21211) Glad you enjoyed it!
1/7/24, 10:10 PM
This is a very hot story and concept—I was reading it just to approve it at first, but it got hotter and hotter as time went on! I also appreciate your exploration of serious themes like toxic masculinity especially in the father relationship, and I approve of your coach's empathy for his students. Good shit! Oh, one other thing, I would suggest separating dialogue into more paragraphs—it's standard practice to have a new paragraph every time a new person is speaking. I found it hard to tell who was speaking in any given string of dialogue because it was all in one paragraph and there were few markers to tell me what words were being said by which person. The dialogue was definitely hot, though, and smooth!

1/7/24, 10:59 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) HI! Thank you so much for the comment. I see why all the fanfic writers were always so excited about getting them :sweat_smile: Like in the begining I didn't plan to have the step-dad play such a big role, but (SPOILER i guess) my fave trope is like revenge/role-reversal/small(er)-on-top kinda dynamic, and I wanted coach to stay the alpha, so someone had to take that place. As for the coach, I do myself prefer the caring type of domination to humiliation, so I wanted him to be such a figure. We'll have both of course - but the coach fantasy started all of this, so he'll probably be the carrier of my personal fantasies. Also thanks for the tip! I did think of that at some point, but was afraid of making the paragraphs too short, but i did go through the whole thing like 4 times, so i didn't even notice it wasn't clear - I added them after reading your comment, so it should be better now.
1/7/24, 9:47 PM
I liked the ending, tbh. Part of it is because I think it’s hot when the bad guy wins in situations like this. But also, it was a completely forced mental overhaul from the start - the ending just confirmed that more plainly than the rest of the story. Saying it only turned dark now would mean ignoring everything that led up to it. I enjoyed the finale!