Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/7/24, 12:08 AM
Great story.
1/6/24, 8:09 PM
Really hot story! i love that it seems like it's just a snapshot within a larger context, but tells us everything we need to imagine the rest of what's happening. Great work!

1/6/24, 11:40 PM
@[Fred W. Kong](/user/show/476663) Thanks Fred. Yes, it’s also an easy way to skip all the boring set up, but shhh, don’t tell anyone.
1/6/24, 11:29 PM
Great idea and start of an interesting plot! Though it would have been even better if it was a little bit longer so some of the processes and background of the premise could be elaborated in some more details. But overall a great start and I look forward to the next bits!
1/6/24, 10:21 PM
But I want Nick as my rubber slave and toy! I would gladly collar him and have him in chains. I've always enjoyed how several of the characters could have moments on both sides. And then to see how they ended up in this 'version'. While I'm not a fan of the daddy and son troupe, I completely get why that happened. He wanted Mr. Freedom to become the new Tri-Hard, and in a way, he still got that. Though, ironically, its Travis that has the most comical ending. Being one of the officers, he can't help but worship the same guy he thought so little of. But still, I loved how both Nick and Henry fell as they did. Nick getting overloaded in 'team spirit' and Henry once again submits to his inner desires. Though if this is the 'What If' does that mean this is not the real ending? Or just a possible ending if the reader choices? Regardless, the 'Good Ending' is going to be just as good!

1/6/24, 11:21 PM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) Don't worry, this isn't the only ending. There'll be a split-off from the previous chapter to this one where the main story continues on. You could call the the **Tri-Hard** ending,... Glad you liked it, and I hope you enjoy what comes next!
1/6/24, 10:31 PM
Hoping for more soon, but I kind of like the meta-story, that the longer it takes Edlam to add more, the longer Jason is just obediently and eagerly eating out Chester's ass in the CEO office, which gets me going even without new chapters :P.
1/6/24, 8:37 PM
This is really hot <3

1/6/24, 9:19 PM
@[timpu713](/user/show/10045954) Will I respond to every comment? MAYBE! Thank you :magic_wand::heartbeat: :tropical_drink:
AgentCoyner
1/6/24, 7:52 PM
Not usually a kink I'm super into, but damn that was really well written!

1/6/24, 9:18 PM
@[AgentCoyner](/user/show/10008527) All I want is to be patted on the head and told I did a good job (thank you!)
1/5/24, 6:16 PM
By far my favorite part. I love seeing how quickly and hard cap falls!

1/6/24, 8:43 PM
@[Napalm](/user/show/908052) No hero is immune to a good hypno-spanking, not even Captain America himself!
1/6/24, 7:47 PM
Great job. Love the obliviousness, and stoked for Yuan that he gets to join the meathead club.

1/6/24, 8:14 PM
@[Derek Williams](/user/show/175661) Thank you Derek! There’s something quite humorous about writing oblivious characters.