Recent Comments

Feb 4, 2023
1/6/24, 12:48 PM
Excellent read! Now I'm suddenly craving a haircut. Love all the themes used, elegantly woven to create this transformation. Glad Jackie has no regrets.

1/6/24, 4:15 PM
@[astrologus](/user/show/1037572) Thank you! I’m sure we can get you a similar haircut 😏
Apr 28, 2022
SpeedoLuver
1/6/24, 3:23 PM
The king was closet Case gay in need of a serious buttfucking. The Orc sure bitched him and his men. 🀒πŸ₯΅πŸ€‘πŸ˜ˆ
1/6/24, 5:21 AM
Fucking Fantastic πŸ˜‹ I shot my seed 3 seperately times reading this the first time through. It's super sexy and satisfying πŸ’¦ Can't wait for more chapters to continue. One with Liam and one back at Jeremiah's home with the cops. 😈 Might I even add that this adapted to a comic strip would be worth while πŸ˜‰

1/6/24, 2:07 PM
@KhrizzzToePhur I’m glad you enjoyed the story, 😊 I think there’s an opportunity to explore the Liam storyline, as well as the cops too. I like your idea of creating a comic. Thanks for the feedback.
Jan 5, 2024
Piper
1/6/24, 1:20 PM
I like the second half a lot as you add a lot of fun details on the altered reality. Fun character work as well. It's fun and hot. That said I feel the start of the story needed a little more set up on events. Or just needed to be cut as it doesn't impact the second half as he wakes up new years day
Titan
1/6/24, 12:54 PM
Yes, please keep going. Not into everything here but for some reason your story has me hooked and I’m in.
1/6/24, 12:06 PM
Why do i have a feeling this would be a very hot series. Cant wait to read more from this.
Jan 5, 2024
1/6/24, 7:00 AM
You should continue this story
1/6/24, 3:59 AM
Super hot story! I want more!
Elm
1/6/24, 3:21 AM
A great start! Love your stories!
1/6/24, 3:02 AM
This is an interesting start to a series and with the Danger Boy series and the Handler's Collection it's a welcome addition. I'm a bit busy but I may take up your offer to expand this world.