Recent Comments

1/6/24, 8:18 AM
Wow, what can I say? That was amazing! I loved the premise and the slow burn was really well done. I would love to see more in this universe.

1/6/24, 7:04 PM
@[Ruffcub](/user/show/21211) Thank you!!! The magical stuff crept in with revisions, and maybe I'll revisit this world in the future. Thanks for the encouragement :heart_eyes:
1/6/24, 3:18 AM
God damn, I really loved this one. Where's that pop-up bar heading next?

1/6/24, 7:00 PM
@[Dubbel](/user/show/913842) Thank you! I avoided listing too much of the bar's menu because I didn't want to set too many expectations... but I'm glad you liked it! Means a lot.
Anonymous
1/6/24, 2:22 AM
Great story! Loved the end.

1/6/24, 6:58 PM
@Anonymous Thank you! Admit that I get nervous before posting stuff, so I appreciate the love.
1/6/24, 4:50 PM
Thank you guys tried to get it out before Christmas but with being busy and getting sick a while ago couldn't get this sorry out fast enough. Working on the last chapter as well and a submission for the new contest.
Feb 4, 2023
1/6/24, 4:33 PM
Don't threaten me with a good time! πŸ’–πŸ˜˜
Feb 4, 2023
1/6/24, 12:48 PM
Excellent read! Now I'm suddenly craving a haircut. Love all the themes used, elegantly woven to create this transformation. Glad Jackie has no regrets.

1/6/24, 4:15 PM
@[astrologus](/user/show/1037572) Thank you! I’m sure we can get you a similar haircut 😏
Apr 28, 2022
SpeedoLuver
1/6/24, 3:23 PM
The king was closet Case gay in need of a serious buttfucking. The Orc sure bitched him and his men. 🀒πŸ₯΅πŸ€‘πŸ˜ˆ
1/6/24, 5:21 AM
Fucking Fantastic πŸ˜‹ I shot my seed 3 seperately times reading this the first time through. It's super sexy and satisfying πŸ’¦ Can't wait for more chapters to continue. One with Liam and one back at Jeremiah's home with the cops. 😈 Might I even add that this adapted to a comic strip would be worth while πŸ˜‰

1/6/24, 2:07 PM
@KhrizzzToePhur I’m glad you enjoyed the story, 😊 I think there’s an opportunity to explore the Liam storyline, as well as the cops too. I like your idea of creating a comic. Thanks for the feedback.
Jan 5, 2024
Piper
1/6/24, 1:20 PM
I like the second half a lot as you add a lot of fun details on the altered reality. Fun character work as well. It's fun and hot. That said I feel the start of the story needed a little more set up on events. Or just needed to be cut as it doesn't impact the second half as he wakes up new years day
Titan
1/6/24, 12:54 PM
Yes, please keep going. Not into everything here but for some reason your story has me hooked and I’m in.