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1/5/24, 4:02 PM
Great twist at the end that the drone workers are going to enslave the clients they will be servicing aboard the ship. I'm really eager to read Part 2!

1/5/24, 9:08 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) omg thanks so much! i frequently see a lot of your posts on here and really love your work!
1/5/24, 8:10 PM
Love it!! You're amazing at crafting a story and getting the conflict just right 😍
FuckIt'A.Sunday
1/5/24, 7:25 PM
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1/5/24, 7:14 PM
When is the next chapter?
1/5/24, 6:24 PM
A slave best friend would be nice
scamnumber6534123
1/5/24, 5:58 PM
I LOVED IT
1/5/24, 3:00 PM
Hi Hypnothrill, I appreciate the constructive feedback. I was trying to convey a sense of urgency, along the lines of a zombie apocalypse. I may write another chapter and I will take your suggestion to heart. Thank you.
1/5/24, 2:17 PM
Fun and fast-paced little story, but I wonder if the change is a little too instantaneous. You could get a lot more dramatic tension if the subject was able to put up some temporary resistance as he gradually transformed into an orc.
10/4/23, 7:14 PM
I remember the original story fondly, so I was prepared for the mechanics of the story but the twist and turns still surprised me. A really clever way to write reality altering. I could easily see it continued with other settings. A freshman at college getting better and better acquainted with his roommate, classmates and professors. Or an Office setting with a boss wanting to highten moral more and more.

10/6/23, 2:46 AM
@[Lytcom](/user/show/602531) Thank you! And I'm glad some of the reruns of the day were able to surprise you, was a little concerned with the length that it would get repetitive. And thanks for the suggestions! As a mechanic I think it works better when there's a lot of background details to tweak throughout, so both of those settings could be good.

1/5/24, 2:07 PM
@[TickledPink](/user/show/151577) I like those ideas too, they could be good part 3 and 4
Geo
1/5/24, 1:50 PM
This series is getting better by the chapter! Maybe some cigars get in play at some point... 😏