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scamnumber6534123
1/5/24, 5:58 PM
I LOVED IT
1/5/24, 3:00 PM
Hi Hypnothrill, I appreciate the constructive feedback. I was trying to convey a sense of urgency, along the lines of a zombie apocalypse. I may write another chapter and I will take your suggestion to heart. Thank you.
1/5/24, 2:17 PM
Fun and fast-paced little story, but I wonder if the change is a little too instantaneous. You could get a lot more dramatic tension if the subject was able to put up some temporary resistance as he gradually transformed into an orc.
10/4/23, 7:14 PM
I remember the original story fondly, so I was prepared for the mechanics of the story but the twist and turns still surprised me. A really clever way to write reality altering. I could easily see it continued with other settings. A freshman at college getting better and better acquainted with his roommate, classmates and professors. Or an Office setting with a boss wanting to highten moral more and more.

10/6/23, 2:46 AM
@[Lytcom](/user/show/602531) Thank you! And I'm glad some of the reruns of the day were able to surprise you, was a little concerned with the length that it would get repetitive. And thanks for the suggestions! As a mechanic I think it works better when there's a lot of background details to tweak throughout, so both of those settings could be good.

1/5/24, 2:07 PM
@[TickledPink](/user/show/151577) I like those ideas too, they could be good part 3 and 4
Geo
1/5/24, 1:50 PM
This series is getting better by the chapter! Maybe some cigars get in play at some point... 😏
Rubberspiraldronthiago
1/5/24, 11:03 AM
Yes!! I love this
1/5/24, 10:55 AM
Great story, I love reading a lot of your stories 10/10
Anonymous
1/5/24, 8:30 AM
I'm so hard
1/5/24, 6:22 AM
Hypnothrill! My heart (and other parts) skip a beat when I see your name appear! Loved it and I enjoyed the visual stimulus! A nice easy and quick read that still packed your erotic punch! Would love to see the other pics in the forum ;) Can't wait for what 2024 has in store for you!
1/5/24, 5:21 AM
When this going to happen in real life too? 🥵