Recent Comments

Kip
1/4/24, 11:45 PM
Totally reminds me of the Ktarian Game in Star Trek: The Next Generation. šŸ˜€
1/4/24, 10:56 PM
Love the story getting revenge on bullies, I think if u don't mind me saying the bullies should remember been humiliated and not allowed to tell anyone that way the revenge is sweeter they will be able to talk to each other about it and worried every day what jack will do to them but great story thanks
phillipsm
1/4/24, 10:31 PM
Great story, shame it was so short. Felt like there was enough in the idea to make a decent multi-chapter slow burn. Still an enjoyable read as is. Was disappointed to see you using the AI images though and I hope its not something your going to keep doing in future.
1/4/24, 10:27 PM
Im enjoying this slow burn story. Im excited to see what happens next.
1/4/24, 9:48 PM
Kept me hard the whole way through.
1/4/24, 9:15 PM
Never miss a story from Hypnothrill, and surely this one was a good one again! No sex or action per se, but love the setup and revealing of the community and futile resistance of Kevin to be assimilated. I would definitely love to see more with this...if Kevin's dad would fall into it as well on his return, what's behind the Circuit, where it's from and where it's going with this, etc... But I'll leave that to you and I'll just stay tuned for any new stories that you'll come up with!
Zander
1/4/24, 1:40 PM
the story is great, it would be nice if there were pictures of the characters in this story.I would like to see how you imagined them when you wrote this story.

1/4/24, 8:47 PM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) Thanks for your lovely comment. I'm wary of over-describing characters because I know we don't all like the same things and it gives people the flexibility to add in their own fantasy elements. It's also fair to say they are entirely in my head and so it's tricky to have a picture of them... That said, I've found a couple of photos to give you an idea, which I'll try to put in for you.
Martin
1/4/24, 8:35 PM
That was an amazingly well-written sex scene! You've got real talent!
Anonymous
1/4/24, 8:29 PM
Loving this!
1/4/24, 8:25 PM
I have to say I’m really enjoying this story.