Recent Comments

Zander
1/4/24, 1:40 PM
the story is great, it would be nice if there were pictures of the characters in this story.I would like to see how you imagined them when you wrote this story.

1/4/24, 8:47 PM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) Thanks for your lovely comment. I'm wary of over-describing characters because I know we don't all like the same things and it gives people the flexibility to add in their own fantasy elements. It's also fair to say they are entirely in my head and so it's tricky to have a picture of them... That said, I've found a couple of photos to give you an idea, which I'll try to put in for you.
Martin
1/4/24, 8:35 PM
That was an amazingly well-written sex scene! You've got real talent!
Anonymous
1/4/24, 8:29 PM
Loving this!
1/4/24, 8:25 PM
I have to say I’m really enjoying this story.
Anonymous
1/4/24, 8:11 PM
Hot story great tough cop taking the guys leather but the guy breaking into his house and forced him to strip was damn hot Taking all his boots and uniforms was slick idea Leather on a tight body great way to get a freakin hard dick in ya jeans
Island Jock
1/4/24, 8:08 PM
This is so good! I love all your stories. Looking forward to seeing how this plays out. Thought it was interesting that the father/son already started out in a relationship, but suppose that just speeds things up. Great story so far!
1/4/24, 4:32 PM
A fun to read. Nick not realizing all of his statements are coming true.

1/4/24, 5:53 PM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) My patrons and I have had fun with this series for sure! Every chapter follows new characters and a new mechanic to how they get the reality warping, truth telling, power.
1/4/24, 4:57 PM
Hmm, in this chapter Edward's cock gets referred to as being really big a couple times. I don't remember it being described as particularly large in the previous chapter, just that he gave a good, hard fuck. So now I'm wondering if his dick is getting slightly enlarged while his partner's intelligence is getting drained. The side effects continue to be original and very interesting!
1/4/24, 4:55 PM
I do enjoy a good magical/cursed toy story. The creation sequence had particularly sensual detail which I very much enjoyed.
1/4/24, 4:36 PM
I dig the idea! The idea of getting piercings and tattoos from someone who's encouraging and pushy at the same time is definitely hot, and I enjoyed the vibes. (By the way, I'd suggest getting a proofreader if you can; I think if you fixed up the grammar this would benefit a lot.)