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Hurricane
1/2/24, 6:50 PM
Damn hot story. Love when you post updates

1/3/24, 3:36 PM
@[Hurricane](/user/show/1255929) Thanks, man. Stay tuned!
mic
1/3/24, 2:54 PM
fucking hot, please more of them, take ownership, humilate expose them more, and more of such hot cocky contests, so great story, thanks
TW
12/31/23, 8:55 AM
This is wonderful and so fantastically hot, thank you for writing it and this entire series so far. Every time I felt like I reached the peak, it kept pushing and pushing, almost to the point where I thought I’d potentially broken my own mental. Admittedly, I had to stop myself and take a breather, so I haven’t reached the end, just yet. But, even now, I feel this burning and I just think it speaks volumes about how memorable and endearing these characters are. Also, just seeing how cruel Tri-Hard can get in this final chapter… this ending can be canon if I don’t acknowledge the next chapter, right? Kidding, kidding! I look forward to coming back for the last quarter but didn’t want to delay my praises.

12/31/23, 1:48 PM
@TW Aww! Thank you! And, yes, I almost didn't put 'non-canon' for that reason but I left it there just to clarify that the main continuity would continue (no sudden ending jumpscare). So, go ahead and enshrine this as your canon ending if you like! I certainly wouldn't blame you ;)

TW
1/3/24, 9:49 AM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) Just wanted to expound upon some thoughts after coming back for a second (and third and fourth) time; I can’t express just how hot it is that you’ve allowed Tri-Hard to take so much from them - and from Henry especially. It’s so unbelievably brilliant that you were able to write Tri-Hard in such a way that he’s able to use that same, old trick on Henry - but now onto Nick. That transfer of love and adoration at the mere reveal that it is in-fact Tri-Hard for whom they should love! I know I will find myself coming to this story and this ending, in particular, again and again. For that bittersweet cuck scene, for Henry’s descent, and especially for Nick’s final bow as Tri-Hard’s lover. I also loved, too, all the soft gestures of affection - I’m a total sucker for a hug or a gentle kiss (and its occasional denial). Thank you, so much, again for this wonderful story.

1/3/24, 2:48 PM
@TW I'm really glad you enjoyed it! This was an ending I really wanted to write and a chance for **Tri-Hard** to 'win'. I had to skip and gloss over a whole lot to avoid stepping on the toes of anything coming up in the main continuity, but I wanted to give this possibility its time in the sun. There won't be another conclusion like this one for a while, but I hope there's plenty to excite you about as things continue (especially in regards to characters who may have been 'sidelined' during this ending.)
1/3/24, 3:35 AM
I LOVE your writing. It's so playful and hot and devilish. This is a great entry. Really glad to see our best friend Bull again.

1/3/24, 1:36 PM
@[Rock Creek Werewolf](/user/show/10002145) Thanks, RCW - that's great to hear!
Jack
1/3/24, 7:20 AM
This is the kind of writing that makes me want to be a better writer. I am blown away by the quality, the sexiness, and the sheer talent on display. If there is anything, anything at all, that I can do to help this series continue, I'm your man.

1/3/24, 1:19 PM
@[Jack](/user/show/915335) Thanks man! I do have one or two more chapters in the tank for this series but haven't made time to write, unfortunately. Thanks for the encouragement!
1/3/24, 4:20 AM
Everything from the use of onomatopoeia to the hard-science really brings this story to life. Love the slow burn and the cliff-hanger too.
Anonymous
1/3/24, 2:41 AM
Excellent. Happy for the return of Waylan!

1/3/24, 3:10 AM
@Anonymous Thanks! Glad ya like it!
1/3/24, 3:09 AM
And note for the story/series, I've been told that the multiple Giselas can be confusing - sorry! ;) In the Kol universe, daughters are generally named like in old Roman times, where they all received the same name (a variant of their father's) and so were distinguished by number, "major," "minor" and nicknames. Hence Gisela Major (Bull's first love), and Gisela Minor (the sister he ultimately married). Terribly chauvinist practice, I know, but I love it for the world - but can be confusing (since I don't think I've explained it since Book 1....) Anyway, hope y'all enjoy!
1/3/24, 1:45 AM
Please continue!!!
1/2/24, 11:53 PM
As a swimmer, I appreciate the attention to detail. Following!