Recent Comments

1/3/24, 4:20 AM
Everything from the use of onomatopoeia to the hard-science really brings this story to life. Love the slow burn and the cliff-hanger too.
Anonymous
1/3/24, 2:41 AM
Excellent. Happy for the return of Waylan!

1/3/24, 3:10 AM
@Anonymous Thanks! Glad ya like it!
1/3/24, 3:09 AM
And note for the story/series, I've been told that the multiple Giselas can be confusing - sorry! ;) In the Kol universe, daughters are generally named like in old Roman times, where they all received the same name (a variant of their father's) and so were distinguished by number, "major," "minor" and nicknames. Hence Gisela Major (Bull's first love), and Gisela Minor (the sister he ultimately married). Terribly chauvinist practice, I know, but I love it for the world - but can be confusing (since I don't think I've explained it since Book 1....) Anyway, hope y'all enjoy!
1/3/24, 1:45 AM
Please continue!!!
1/2/24, 11:53 PM
As a swimmer, I appreciate the attention to detail. Following!
X
12/28/23, 9:45 AM
New Chapter next year?

12/28/23, 9:57 AM
@X Yeah. I was thinking of writing a Christmas special, though it seems it will come a few days after New Year. Hopefully, the season spirit is still there.

X
12/29/23, 1:01 PM
@[avionneX](/user/show/1683719) Can’t wait!….. Share some spoilers?

JX
1/2/24, 2:50 PM
@[avionneX](/user/show/1683719) Update on the next chapters release date?

1/2/24, 11:35 PM
@JX I'll try to submit it by this Sunday.
1/2/24, 10:13 PM
Wow that's a perfect start ! The shower scene is really hot, always good to have non-sexual scene with the characters, sounds much more realistic.
Anonymous
1/2/24, 7:52 PM
I don't leave comments often but I think this is the second or 3rd one I've left in your stories. I LOVE the world you created with the Parker Brothers. I love how you infused each and every story and scene you write with eroticism AND sensuality. I love the raw emotions your characters feel and I love how your words make me feel these emotions as well. You are a DAMN GOOD WRITER! This is another story in my favorites. Salud!
1/2/24, 7:12 PM
YES .......Please more.......the start was amazing
Hurricane
1/2/24, 6:58 PM
Im very interested to see where this goes