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12/31/23, 3:30 PM
Very enjoyable. I love mind control stories about cops. I know at that at this point it's unlikely you will add to it and it works very well a a short one-shot, but it's a shame we didn't see Joe and Brian playing together, maybe even having Dakota join them or perhaps one or both had has a son that may have had to spend time at the rehab in some capacity or another that is "convinced" to join in.
Anonymous
12/31/23, 3:25 PM
One of the absolute best, period.
12/31/23, 3:03 PM
WOW! Man you take up residence in our minds, never vacate it, and we wouldn't want you to, ever. You understand us so well. My highschool, like Eden, forced us to think about ourselves to expose ourselves to our peers to hear from them in group sessions of 30 or so about our strengths and weaknesses and the brothers that taught us pushed us to be open to listen to embrace and to improve. Like Eden is doing to Sammy. Turns out classmates saw me as a go to for organizing us, setting up parties events keeping us safe but pushing boundaries nonetheless. They recognized service basically and i recognized i served and enjoyed doing so. I've been pretty thoughful as a result. At 6 ft 4 I'm really thoughtful of how others would respond and want from me. BUT, your writing, in addition to being hot, is to my empathy what a session in the gym is to my lats or quads etc. You exercise it. You're an excellent writer but an equally good man. I'd trust you as a dom in a heart beat. Thank you for this story and all the others. Bonus it was set in Aspen. The whole chapter was perfect, like every other has been.
12/31/23, 2:57 PM
Really hot and fun story--a good idea too, I like the virus lore and small scene with the president freaking out about the ramifications lol. I've never seen AI nail the descriptions for pictures before, so good job on that too. While I agree with others the links are a bit distracting, I can't think of any other way to do it since it probably won't fit well in the story editor in-image. Then again, I don't think the pictures are even needed since your descriptions are good as-is. Looking forward to reading more!
mic
12/31/23, 1:28 PM
Fucking Hot , More scallys lads like him should do , more tf s into urinals , he should take their wallet cards phone too and ask for their PIN numbers , please strap more guys in places like this , so hot cool , want too be forced to drink
Dec 21, 2023
12/31/23, 7:50 AM
I couldn't wait! I downloaded the whole story and had trouble putting it down. I love transformations in which either a character or relationships develop under some form of pressure or control. My strongest personal fetish involves some form of D/s seduction. I also like stories that end happily, though I also happily accept the occasional situation in which a really nasty evil unforgivable character gets his dire comeupance. Your story happily twisted all my norms around to the point where I finally thought I was the one to get the comeupance. Regardless of who did what to, with, and/or for whom, I think the story is incredibly hot and I expect I will read it again soon. The chapters you chose to represent the book worked well to represent the concept and fire up the imagination. Thanks so much for a wonderful read! [I found writing this comment a little tricky as I didn't want to give anything away to a new reader (other than the excitement to go buy the book), but still wanted to write something reasonably understandable to @absman420 and others who have read the whole book. Would love to chat more about the last chapter or two, but that might spoil the last twist.]

12/31/23, 1:11 PM
@[boi98229](/user/show/10027285) I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you so much for this review -- please consider copy/pasting it over to Amazon! You've given me a chance to talk about form, which I love -- writer geek stuff ahead. THE IMPLANT is written in the form of a Five-Act Tragedy (ala Shakespeare etal) When I first conceptualized it, I "saw" the story as a three-act with an epilogue, but when I started writing, the 2nd Act just grew and grew until finally, I broke it into two separate acts -- so the work became a four-act with an epilogue, which didn't feel right to me, either, so I expanded the epilogue into a full act. Looking at the 5-act tragedy structure, the climax happens at the end of Act 3 (as mine did), falling action in Act 4 (which still implies forward motion, just fallout from the climax) and then Act 5, Tragedy, the horrific outcomes. I threw a little anti-climax into Act 4 -- just for fun -- but readers who are unused to the 5-Act form didn't understand that the end of Act 3 is the dramatic climax, not the end of Act 4, so they've felt "cheated" by the end of Act 4. I get that. If you ever read it again, read it with that in mind -- the fervor that got you to the end of the 3rd act (The Twin's Party and subsequent action) will hopefully read a little differently. Please feel free to DM on the Forum, or on Twitter or Threads to chat about the last few chapters.
Nov 11, 2023
mic
12/31/23, 1:03 PM
Fuck hot, more of this hot str8 football master , hope he takes their belongings wallet phones with him , and ask Nate for his PIN number befor he gets briefs , please more adventures of him and tf gay fags
mic
12/31/23, 12:34 PM
So Hot , nice stuffed full , love the hose and funel
mic
12/31/23, 12:27 PM
Wow very Hot , Great ideas , more of this master , and a story where a model gets locked in stocks , and then the paint teacher musst leave and the class full of horns guys takes advantage and stuff his holes would be hot
mic
12/31/23, 12:18 PM
Fucking Hot Story , one of the best ever , please more of him and Hotel stays, more new guests who get tricked , more of the cleaning service , he has forgotten to lick suck clean their feet , there should be a card cash paying terminal , so he doesn’t run out of cash but pay the services with card and they see his PIN number , and a stuffing service for leaving guest would be cool , they help pack your bag and stuff your throat ass with cocks, dildos and plugs and you leave with raspy voice / can’t talk, and even locked in chasity cage , where one of the staff holds your keys , and a leaving contract to sign would be hot , cashrape tryout guests more , milk them dry, let them serve more longer and come back , wow ideas , loved your story , was so hot , have read it 3 times and creamed , thanks 🙏, so hot cool