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Dec 21, 2023
12/31/23, 7:50 AM
I couldn't wait! I downloaded the whole story and had trouble putting it down. I love transformations in which either a character or relationships develop under some form of pressure or control. My strongest personal fetish involves some form of D/s seduction. I also like stories that end happily, though I also happily accept the occasional situation in which a really nasty evil unforgivable character gets his dire comeupance. Your story happily twisted all my norms around to the point where I finally thought I was the one to get the comeupance. Regardless of who did what to, with, and/or for whom, I think the story is incredibly hot and I expect I will read it again soon. The chapters you chose to represent the book worked well to represent the concept and fire up the imagination. Thanks so much for a wonderful read! [I found writing this comment a little tricky as I didn't want to give anything away to a new reader (other than the excitement to go buy the book), but still wanted to write something reasonably understandable to @absman420 and others who have read the whole book. Would love to chat more about the last chapter or two, but that might spoil the last twist.]

12/31/23, 1:11 PM
@[boi98229](/user/show/10027285) I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you so much for this review -- please consider copy/pasting it over to Amazon! You've given me a chance to talk about form, which I love -- writer geek stuff ahead. THE IMPLANT is written in the form of a Five-Act Tragedy (ala Shakespeare etal) When I first conceptualized it, I "saw" the story as a three-act with an epilogue, but when I started writing, the 2nd Act just grew and grew until finally, I broke it into two separate acts -- so the work became a four-act with an epilogue, which didn't feel right to me, either, so I expanded the epilogue into a full act. Looking at the 5-act tragedy structure, the climax happens at the end of Act 3 (as mine did), falling action in Act 4 (which still implies forward motion, just fallout from the climax) and then Act 5, Tragedy, the horrific outcomes. I threw a little anti-climax into Act 4 -- just for fun -- but readers who are unused to the 5-Act form didn't understand that the end of Act 3 is the dramatic climax, not the end of Act 4, so they've felt "cheated" by the end of Act 4. I get that. If you ever read it again, read it with that in mind -- the fervor that got you to the end of the 3rd act (The Twin's Party and subsequent action) will hopefully read a little differently. Please feel free to DM on the Forum, or on Twitter or Threads to chat about the last few chapters.
Nov 11, 2023
mic
12/31/23, 1:03 PM
Fuck hot, more of this hot str8 football master , hope he takes their belongings wallet phones with him , and ask Nate for his PIN number befor he gets briefs , please more adventures of him and tf gay fags
mic
12/31/23, 12:34 PM
So Hot , nice stuffed full , love the hose and funel
mic
12/31/23, 12:27 PM
Wow very Hot , Great ideas , more of this master , and a story where a model gets locked in stocks , and then the paint teacher musst leave and the class full of horns guys takes advantage and stuff his holes would be hot
mic
12/31/23, 12:18 PM
Fucking Hot Story , one of the best ever , please more of him and Hotel stays, more new guests who get tricked , more of the cleaning service , he has forgotten to lick suck clean their feet , there should be a card cash paying terminal , so he doesn’t run out of cash but pay the services with card and they see his PIN number , and a stuffing service for leaving guest would be cool , they help pack your bag and stuff your throat ass with cocks, dildos and plugs and you leave with raspy voice / can’t talk, and even locked in chasity cage , where one of the staff holds your keys , and a leaving contract to sign would be hot , cashrape tryout guests more , milk them dry, let them serve more longer and come back , wow ideas , loved your story , was so hot , have read it 3 times and creamed , thanks 🙏, so hot cool
12/31/23, 9:09 AM
:white_heart: I hope to read more
Anonymous
12/31/23, 6:50 AM
More! More!
12/31/23, 6:48 AM
One of the true classics!
12/31/23, 5:24 AM
Hot story and set up.
chen
12/31/23, 5:04 AM
Very creative setting. I like it