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5/29/25, 1:47 PM
Spectacular....Thanks!!!

5/30/25, 8:10 AM
@[Dan25](/user/show/10053172) Thanks for reading!
5/29/25, 11:46 AM
Jack, your writing delves into the heart of issues. It is truly revealing and draws the reader in for a great experience. I will read as long as you write and look forward to your works to appear. Thank you again!

5/30/25, 8:10 AM
@[mjkuhl](/user/show/10020940) Thank you sir...I am so glad to see you're still here and with me.
5/30/25, 7:26 AM
I'm looking forward to the next chapter where Dan goes after Micheal, and hopefully his dad plays the role of skillful guide.
5/30/25, 7:21 AM
Perfect next step
May 28, 2025
Zander
5/29/25, 2:28 PM
A hot story, I hope it is not a one-off and there will be a continuation, as I see there are prerequisites for this. The ending was very funny, I almost died laughing.🤣 I hope the story will continue with other characters too and with consequences for John.

5/30/25, 3:00 AM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) Thanks I'm glad you liked it. I don't have immediate plans for a follow up, I need to get some updates done for my other stories, but I had a lot of fun writing this and delving into John's psyche, so I could certainly see myself coming back and adding more later. And of course, having used the Void here, you're right that it could be fun to explore other characters in similar situations too. Thanks again for reading and commenting!
Anonymous
5/30/25, 12:01 AM
WOOF! Fuck Yeah! Fill me with that Leather seed!
5/29/25, 10:11 PM
Such a great story!
Zander
5/29/25, 10:03 PM
The series can be continued where Veil comes to another office where Theo works and captures almost everyone. But at the end of the story, one of the characters finds a way to resist hypnosis and help others secretly from Veil to get out of brainwashing, where in the finale there is an orgy and the overthrow of Veil. I hope in the continuation there will be more sex under the table in the presence of one of the employees, dirty talk and Treason (when after brainwashing from Veil. some employees cheat on their wives or husbands). But I hope that in the very finale the story will end with Veil being overthrown, and those who were under control will simply lose their memory of the events associated with Veil.
5/29/25, 5:42 PM
It is so much fun and well-written... the intensity of the reveal is BEAUTIFUL. I loved the warmth and the feelings and all the visual writing.

5/29/25, 9:04 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Thanks brother!
May 19, 2025
5/29/25, 8:50 PM
Reading how two men get hypnotized common without feeling it is soooo hot , that i must read the next chapters too. It's really addictive