Recent Comments

May 19, 2025
5/26/25, 7:07 PM
Hmm, Ko-Fi does not seem to work for me. This first chapter was a nice start, though.

5/26/25, 8:33 PM
@[Dr No](/user/show/1584609) That's strange! Does the site not work or is there an error when you try to sign up? Let me know if there's anything I can help to get you registered.

5/30/25, 8:18 AM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) I managed to sign up, but I'm unable to make a payment. The request will hang and never return. I see many others could help out with a bit of extra motivation, though. I suppose it might be my reluctance to accept cookies (and potentially leak private information on websites), so I may have to pay for that privilege by not being able to enjoy your story for now.

5/30/25, 1:20 PM
@[Dr No](/user/show/1584609) Same for me. I thought i wouldn't succeed but it last a long long time till your credir card is proved. And this story is worth waiting all this time
5/30/25, 11:39 AM
nice one 👍
5/30/25, 11:38 AM
Very hot, great premise - looking forward to more
May 19, 2025
5/30/25, 10:59 AM
i can't get enough of this story. It's sooo hot and get me deeply
5/30/25, 2:55 AM
Awesome as always Jack! Really looking forward to seeing Buck's and David's stories unfold.

5/30/25, 8:10 AM
@[Araloth](/user/show/10039099) So am I!!
5/29/25, 1:47 PM
Spectacular....Thanks!!!

5/30/25, 8:10 AM
@[Dan25](/user/show/10053172) Thanks for reading!
5/29/25, 11:46 AM
Jack, your writing delves into the heart of issues. It is truly revealing and draws the reader in for a great experience. I will read as long as you write and look forward to your works to appear. Thank you again!

5/30/25, 8:10 AM
@[mjkuhl](/user/show/10020940) Thank you sir...I am so glad to see you're still here and with me.
5/30/25, 7:26 AM
I'm looking forward to the next chapter where Dan goes after Micheal, and hopefully his dad plays the role of skillful guide.
5/30/25, 7:21 AM
Perfect next step
May 28, 2025
Zander
5/29/25, 2:28 PM
A hot story, I hope it is not a one-off and there will be a continuation, as I see there are prerequisites for this. The ending was very funny, I almost died laughing.🤣 I hope the story will continue with other characters too and with consequences for John.

5/30/25, 3:00 AM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) Thanks I'm glad you liked it. I don't have immediate plans for a follow up, I need to get some updates done for my other stories, but I had a lot of fun writing this and delving into John's psyche, so I could certainly see myself coming back and adding more later. And of course, having used the Void here, you're right that it could be fun to explore other characters in similar situations too. Thanks again for reading and commenting!