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12/29/23, 6:29 PM
I’d love to see the coach or even the dad lock the cumdump’s cock on a chastity cage and fuck him until he cums soft and untouched
12/29/23, 3:53 PM
Please tell me you're kidding. Epilogue? Unless this is a porn treatment of a spec script for a new Twilight Zone movie, you haven't finished the story yet, and you've perpetrated a fraud that cheats the reader out of a resolution. If this is all you're gonna do, then I just wasted an hour reading this, and you'll get no goodwill or further reading of anything else you write from me.

Martin
12/29/23, 4:43 PM
@[HypnoMutt](/user/show/10022083) You've got 14 chapters of hot material and you still complain about wasted time? I'm not sure if you're serious, but if you are, you should check your attitude. Noone has any obligation towards you.
12/29/23, 11:00 AM
Can’t wait for the next chapter!!! This is super hot!
12/22/23, 9:08 PM
Great use of contrasts to show how thoroughly Frank conquered Luke. The contrast between Luke’s and Frank’s bodies is expertly done along with the contrast between Luke’s humiliation and arousal. The suspense is also good. You keep us guessing as to how much of Frank’s power over Luke are natural and how much they are induced pharmaceutically (in the power of his cock) and hypnotically or pharmaceutically (in Frank’s power over Luke’s mind).

12/29/23, 8:12 AM
@[Evan14](/user/show/10043950) thanks! glad you enjoyed it. the final chapter is just waiting for approval. Hope you enjoy it too
12/29/23, 6:41 AM
getting better, bob is now truly under the influence of Jack and wants his dad to be another version of jack, when is his cloths going to change?
Takanashi
12/29/23, 5:51 AM
Amé cada parte de la historia y si es posible me encantará leer una continuación en el futuro. Excelente trabajo. Felicidades
12/29/23, 4:55 AM
Loved this hot hot story!
12/29/23, 4:36 AM
I hope they all get back to normal size although with Wash enjoying shrinking down to play with Harvey at times.
12/28/23, 6:04 PM
I like the transformation but Nate's part in this feels weird and unnecessary since he doesn't really get his wish and he doesn't really add anything.

12/29/23, 2:13 AM
@[Silvoid](/user/show/1138564) Hey there, thanks for reading! Apologies for not providing more context about the creation of the story. This was a two-part collaboration I did with another writer named Visceral-Stories where he handled Nate's POV as he transforms into one of the college's janitors. If you're curious and would like to check it out, [here's the link](https://visceral-stories.tumblr.com/post/689818340234051584/college-is-transformative-the-lecture-hall-part).
12/28/23, 1:12 PM
Loved this chapter! Thank you for this

12/29/23, 12:04 AM
@[Human Dragon Fruit](/user/show/2742139) That's wonderful to hear! Thank you for the lovely comment :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

12/29/23, 1:28 AM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) Don’t mention it! It is such a fun and creative premise, can’t wait to read where Junior’s story takes him next:)