Amazing chapter, though i have to agree with the above - it is a bit dull on the action, but very understandable why you decided to do so on this chapter. I do wanted to ask if Tucker has some other powers (i.e possessing two people at the same time)? That could make the story a bit more intense and interesting.

A great idea. Lots of potential for possible sequels from the Ice Cream Man. Loved it.

Résultat de la traduction Dear reader, I'd like to apologize for having left you for too many months without any news, and especially without the sequel to my first story. I thank you all for congratulating me and encouraging me to continue. My life has taken an unexpected turn, which has greatly disrupted my writing, and even though a good part of Born's story is already written, I stalled on certain pivotal chapters. But then the desire to write returned, and so for the end of the year, I'm going to try to publish several chapters. I hope that this long waiting period hasn't put you off this story, and that you'll be tempted to read on, and that you'll enjoy reading this story as much as I enjoyed writing it. Don't hesitate to leave comments, whether critical or enthusiastic. I hope you'll enjoy reading it as you move into the New Year. Happy Holidays

Résultat de la traduction Dear reader, I'd like to apologize for having left you for too many months without any news, and especially without the sequel to my first story. I thank you all for congratulating me and encouraging me to continue. My life has taken an unexpected turn, which has greatly disrupted my writing, and even though a good part of Born's story is already written, I stalled on certain pivotal chapters. But then the desire to write returned, and so for the end of the year, I'm going to try to publish several chapters. I hope that this long waiting period hasn't put you off this story, and that you'll be tempted to read on, and that you'll enjoy reading this story as much as I enjoyed writing it. Don't hesitate to leave comments, whether critical or enthusiastic. I hope you'll enjoy reading it as you move into the New Year. Happy Holidays

Martin, It's unfortunate that my first interaction with you isn't as positive as I might have wished for, because I have a great deal of respect for you and what you have built, and have enjoyed this site and your presence here for a long time. I've been a professional playwright and performance artist for more than 30 years, and have nearly 40 years' experience with erotic hypnosis as a kinkster and clinician, so you can be sure that my reaction is not just random barking. My view differs from yours. I believe that as storytellers, _we have an obligation to our audience_ to consider the investment they make in the worlds we build and the characters we create. If we lead our readers down the garden path to an unconsidered or inchoate end, we fail to meet our obligation to them and to ourselves. Without a payoff, a coda of some sort, we disregard the reader's investment. That's not just substandard craft and indifferent technique: it has the effect of an emotional gut punch that squanders any goodwill we might have earned, and I take pains to avoid that kind of disrespect to my audience. They bought the ticket; it's my job to give them a good ride _all the way to the **destination** they paid for_. A sentiment I've seen expressed in the GSS forum and on similar sites in response to readers' complaints about the numerous stories that the authors leave unfinished is: "What makes you think an author owes you an ending or anything else for that matter? Who are _you_ to call them out? What nerve. Pipe down and be grateful for what you get on a free website!" Well, I _am_ grateful; these stories are gifts that often affect me deeply and speak to my heart and spirit as well as my animal lust, and they are all labors of love, freely given. But I'm not alone in my frustration with the plethora of incomplete and unfinished stories that take up countless hours of my time, my commitment to the author's vision, and my emotional attachment to the fates of the characters, only to be left hanging yet again, time after disappointing time. And heaven forbid anyone else should pick up the plot and complete the story, even if it's been abandoned for years! Here, it's a case where the author has primed us for an "epilogue" where we're told we can expect a conclusion, if not a resolution, and unfortunately, the writer has not yet provided us with either one. I wasn't just dismayed: I nearly hurled my phone across the room! And I said out loud, "What a _copout_! This is a fresh posting, and I'm not letting this one slide without a fight!" Not that I want to stir up drama; I want the author to _finish the story_ that kept me enthralled and riveted for more than an hour's worth of sleeping-in time on a holiday weekend! This is only the second or third comment I've made on GSS in several years of reading, so if nothing else, you can be sure that I am fully invested in this space, its stories, and the people who create here. Although we disagree on the matter of whether authors have an obligation as storytellers, I hope this skyscraper of text helps smooth out the feathers I ruffed with my post, and that I've been able to convey to you my rationale along with my admiration. Thanks for taking the time to read my response. - HypnoMutt

Love this story and can't wait to see where it goes

This gets hotter and hotter!

I’d love to see the coach or even the dad lock the cumdump’s cock on a chastity cage and fuck him until he cums soft and untouched

Please tell me you're kidding. Epilogue? Unless this is a porn treatment of a spec script for a new Twilight Zone movie, you haven't finished the story yet, and you've perpetrated a fraud that cheats the reader out of a resolution. If this is all you're gonna do, then I just wasted an hour reading this, and you'll get no goodwill or further reading of anything else you write from me.

Can’t wait for the next chapter!!! This is super hot!