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Zander
5/29/25, 10:03 PM
The series can be continued where Veil comes to another office where Theo works and captures almost everyone. But at the end of the story, one of the characters finds a way to resist hypnosis and help others secretly from Veil to get out of brainwashing, where in the finale there is an orgy and the overthrow of Veil. I hope in the continuation there will be more sex under the table in the presence of one of the employees, dirty talk and Treason (when after brainwashing from Veil. some employees cheat on their wives or husbands). But I hope that in the very finale the story will end with Veil being overthrown, and those who were under control will simply lose their memory of the events associated with Veil.
5/29/25, 5:42 PM
It is so much fun and well-written... the intensity of the reveal is BEAUTIFUL. I loved the warmth and the feelings and all the visual writing.

5/29/25, 9:04 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Thanks brother!
May 19, 2025
5/29/25, 8:50 PM
Reading how two men get hypnotized common without feeling it is soooo hot , that i must read the next chapters too. It's really addictive
5/29/25, 6:59 PM
Take his cherry! Don't mind Jake, just take him here and now!

5/29/25, 8:46 PM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) "Big bro, what are you doing... Are you seriously fucking my best friend..." Hahaha.
5/29/25, 6:50 PM
So lovely! And so teasy. You're almost as evil as Dylan!

5/29/25, 8:45 PM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) Dylan might be the Alpha male, but Troy's going to keep him on his toes ;)
5/29/25, 6:39 PM
Oh man, I love this movie! "Prestige". One of my favorite movies of all time, and probably my favorite Nolan movie. That it would be referred to in a story here... :smiling_face_with_three_hearts: I like your style a lot!

5/29/25, 8:44 PM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) Big fan of Nolan. So wanted to just add that in there. Thanks Corin!
Zander
5/29/25, 12:48 PM
Is it possible to read other chapters in advance if they are written? Can you send me a link to my email if the story is already written and you are posting chapters of the story?

5/29/25, 5:12 PM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) Thanks for the support. I only publish on this site. Rendering images are fun but time consuming, unfortunately.

Zander
5/29/25, 5:26 PM
@[brainwashedman](/user/show/10005650) Ok, but I hope the picture of Torres will appear and how he was brainwashed in the car like Kane. I would like to see how you imagine him

5/29/25, 8:40 PM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) Agreed. I am trying to make his experience differ from Kane's. For me, the brainwashing process is my favorite part lol
5/29/25, 8:32 PM
great story
3/13/25, 3:48 PM
mmmm maybe Mark 2 will be an asset to the building site, their own workie IT guy

Anonymous
3/13/25, 6:05 PM
@[MalSkin](/user/show/131172) thanks mate! Your stories top notch! Bit of an inspiration!

5/29/25, 8:27 PM
@[MalSkin](/user/show/131172) Story updated
3/13/25, 1:41 PM
Great start - can’t wait to read more - really presses my buttons

3/13/25, 2:19 PM
@[Stinkykev](/user/show/650784) Cheers mate. Setting up some scenes for future action.

3/25/25, 3:52 PM
@[BigDunlopPurofort](/user/show/10060327) IMO needs a detailed description of dressing in his new stinking work gear and boots and getting a propa skinhead cut

5/29/25, 8:27 PM
@[Stinkykev](/user/show/650784) Story updated