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May 19, 2025
5/29/25, 8:50 PM
Reading how two men get hypnotized common without feeling it is soooo hot , that i must read the next chapters too. It's really addictive
5/29/25, 6:59 PM
Take his cherry! Don't mind Jake, just take him here and now!

5/29/25, 8:46 PM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) "Big bro, what are you doing... Are you seriously fucking my best friend..." Hahaha.
5/29/25, 6:50 PM
So lovely! And so teasy. You're almost as evil as Dylan!

5/29/25, 8:45 PM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) Dylan might be the Alpha male, but Troy's going to keep him on his toes ;)
5/29/25, 6:39 PM
Oh man, I love this movie! "Prestige". One of my favorite movies of all time, and probably my favorite Nolan movie. That it would be referred to in a story here... :smiling_face_with_three_hearts: I like your style a lot!

5/29/25, 8:44 PM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) Big fan of Nolan. So wanted to just add that in there. Thanks Corin!
Zander
5/29/25, 12:48 PM
Is it possible to read other chapters in advance if they are written? Can you send me a link to my email if the story is already written and you are posting chapters of the story?

5/29/25, 5:12 PM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) Thanks for the support. I only publish on this site. Rendering images are fun but time consuming, unfortunately.

Zander
5/29/25, 5:26 PM
@[brainwashedman](/user/show/10005650) Ok, but I hope the picture of Torres will appear and how he was brainwashed in the car like Kane. I would like to see how you imagine him

5/29/25, 8:40 PM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) Agreed. I am trying to make his experience differ from Kane's. For me, the brainwashing process is my favorite part lol
5/29/25, 8:32 PM
great story
3/13/25, 3:48 PM
mmmm maybe Mark 2 will be an asset to the building site, their own workie IT guy

Anonymous
3/13/25, 6:05 PM
@[MalSkin](/user/show/131172) thanks mate! Your stories top notch! Bit of an inspiration!

5/29/25, 8:27 PM
@[MalSkin](/user/show/131172) Story updated
3/13/25, 1:41 PM
Great start - can’t wait to read more - really presses my buttons

3/13/25, 2:19 PM
@[Stinkykev](/user/show/650784) Cheers mate. Setting up some scenes for future action.

3/25/25, 3:52 PM
@[BigDunlopPurofort](/user/show/10060327) IMO needs a detailed description of dressing in his new stinking work gear and boots and getting a propa skinhead cut

5/29/25, 8:27 PM
@[Stinkykev](/user/show/650784) Story updated
5/29/25, 8:12 PM
Excellent
floetenspieler
5/29/25, 7:37 PM
This is one of the best stories about breaking people's mind by mind transformations and the young arrogant boys are to weak to resist