Recent Comments

12/20/23, 1:10 PM
Re-read the entirz thing before this chapter (I had completely forgot about Hans!) And man, you really are one of the best authors on the site!

12/23/23, 9:29 PM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) I’m glad you liked it and thank you for your kind comments. It’s great to know that what you have written is appreciated..
Lavender Lad
12/23/23, 9:07 PM
You can't even imagine how long I have been waiting for you to post something new here, you're one of my favorite writers on this site. Going to throughly enjoy this!
A very pleased reader
12/23/23, 7:40 PM
Honestly? Great finale for a great story 👏 can’t wait for your next one man, honestly the whole concept of the story and the trigger play really made it for me, awesome!
Dec 21, 2023
12/23/23, 5:58 PM
The paperback version is finally available on Amazon. https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0CQVT6S43
6/4/22, 11:11 PM
Sorry working a tonne will be released possibly Monday more likely next Saturday. It’s half finished.

Zander
12/23/23, 5:39 PM
@[Anyonka](/user/show/195201) I hope there will be a continuation)
Zander
12/23/23, 5:22 PM
I wish the chapters were longer and there were more sex scenes.
12/23/23, 4:40 PM
It was an awesome story! Very hearwarming ending!!!:smiling_face_with_three_hearts:
Dec 17, 2023
12/23/23, 4:26 PM
I hope to know what happens next
12/23/23, 4:24 PM
The early exposition is a bit clunky, and there are a lot of I written as "i" and missing "." But it's a good story, even if a bit confusing at first.
12/23/23, 4:16 PM
The writing has noticably got better between chapter 1 and 2. I am excited to see where this will go!:green_heart: