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Dec 21, 2023
12/23/23, 10:50 AM
_Your_ stories... have a habit of making me go over the edge when I'm not even touching myself:joy: Here I am, on my stomach, trying not to get off so quickly, reading the ending, and that just does it for me. Putting me in the head of Eddie and what he's experiencing! I think it's the dichotomy or the sudden sharp transformation I find in your stories and on this website that impress upon me to re-read and experience the slow burn and aftermath. And I'm supposed to be good, with no chastity cage on! Lol

12/23/23, 1:57 PM
@[Anima](/user/show/929667) I am so happy to read your comment! I call this my "edging novel" -- not just because of the sexual stuff, but also because the story edges the reader along until finally... FINALLY gives a release. My goal is to always stay in the reader's head and, rather than beat off to my words, that they can create fantasy of their own using the idea of the story and get off to that.
spiralthiago
12/23/23, 1:51 PM
wow, something that I loved were all the stories, watching them become, how great they were my great loves at night!! You are my great writer, I congratulate you. I WANT MORE!! will there be a continuation?
Anonymous
12/23/23, 1:41 AM
I tried to follow along with this interesting twist, but I ended up really confused. Everything was great up until now, so having Steve be the one under the influence the whole time (with no major hints to suggest otherwise) seemingly came out of nowhere. It’s a great idea, but I’m struggling a bit.

12/23/23, 11:56 AM
@Anonymous I was trying to hide the plot twist but had thought I left in subtle clues as I went along: I thought I had given it away last chapter with the overly convoluted wording Steve used that would see his own hypnosis revealed to him that felt very oddly phrased even to me. Hank's chapter was supposed to be the biggest suggestion that something was amiss, I even put in that he didn't vocalise something without saying what it was; however, the main issue was the logic Steve used to hypnotise relied on the fact that hypnosis sceptic Hank had to believe hypnosis was real for it to work.
12/21/23, 10:49 PM
Well-crafted, as usual; and, I get the Robby Ray reference ("All it takes is a fairy..."),, Pupscout.

12/23/23, 12:27 AM
@[Hypnominion](/user/show/453215) I'm glad somebody got it. Interesting that you're reading this -- Wolf Murdock plays a significant role in my novel, THE CENTAUR'S JOURNEY, Pholus Book 3. Poor Murdock...

Anonymous
12/23/23, 7:28 AM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) I'll purchase your novel in the New Year (the Holidays killed my budget for this month); looking forward to it.
12/23/23, 4:50 AM
I really don't enjoy giving bad reviews to stories on this site. I do appreciate the imagination and writing skills of the authors. I appreciate the time the authors devote to write stories their readers will enjoy. But in my mind the absolute worst stories here are those that have an interesting plot, good characters and relationship development -- the well-written stories i love the most that leave me hanging for months waiting to know what happened to the friends i made reading the story and the author i felt so much kinship with. This story was particularly difficult. I do feel badly about my review, but because this story was cut off so early in a promising life, it can no longer be one of my favorites. I still have hopes that with further chapters this problem could be rectified, but only time will tell. I do apologize for writing a critique that may leave other readers wanting more. Trust me. I understand.
Doopboopdoop
12/23/23, 4:10 AM
Would love to see a continuation of this! Great story, consider the corruption to be on par with my favorite author on this site (EdIAm).
Wafflederg
12/22/23, 2:50 PM
As a concept I really like this, though I think it would have been better served with a more drawn out change, rather than 0 to 100% in a night

Zander
12/22/23, 6:27 PM
@Wafflederg I agree with you 100%. But I would also like Marty Inga's wife to pay cruelly for treason) I do not like when other people who trusted and loved you are used, as a result they were paid with betrayal.I think (my personal opinion)that such people should pay for it.

12/23/23, 4:04 AM
@Wafflederg The effect I was striving for was of a sudden change, one that would be an extreme shock to the person it was being done to. It would also be interesting to spread it out over more time, as you suggested, which I'll keep in mind for a future story. Thanks.

12/23/23, 4:08 AM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) Inga felt misused by her husband and justified in inflicting the paybacks. I like the idea of him seeing his downfall as unfair, which intensifies his feelings about it. Thanks for your feedback.
12/22/23, 10:04 PM
Spanking isn't my thing, but I do love the control and conversion process. Its really hot. And I love how you keep to the characters and make them fun.

12/23/23, 3:19 AM
@[Neon Demon](/user/show/10023852) Thanks. The fact you're enjoying the story even though spanking isn't a kink you have is a huge compliment!
12/17/23, 9:35 AM
Loving this series so far, looking forward to next chapter

12/23/23, 3:16 AM
@[JJ_blueeyes](/user/show/949970) Thanks! I have to remember to keep posting here.
12/21/23, 4:32 AM
I loved seeing Captain America slowly start to give in. I hope Handler escapes and managers to make him succumb completely. It’s such a hot visual

12/22/23, 8:24 PM
@[bas_w123](/user/show/10020618) Agreed, the reason I keep returning to this story is because I want to see Cap completely under the Handler’s control!

12/23/23, 3:16 AM
@[bas_w123](/user/show/10020618) Something about what Cap represents, he's just pure zonk bait, isn't he?

12/23/23, 3:16 AM
@[ls1999](/user/show/2758081) Keep reading, you never know who will fall next!