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5/29/25, 2:25 PM
Great story
5/29/25, 2:10 PM
Please continue! This was an amazing series! As for the name, u think u could change it to something that fit better with what u will write, keeping stories separate even if the new one is a sequel
May 28, 2025
5/29/25, 1:55 PM
Wow. More?
5/29/25, 1:52 PM
Damn Amazing
Zander
5/29/25, 1:26 PM
Let's hope that in the next chapter Harold will be under Grain's table while he takes one of Harold's sons. It would also be very erotic if, when Harold was jumping on Grain's cock taking him inside himself, Grain would tell Harold why, for what purpose and how he turned (took control) and forced him to become his slave and who already serves him and helped him. I would also like the chapter to be from Harold's point of view at that moment, as he understands everything in his mind, panics and gets very angry and can't do anything about it. Grain would tell Harold that he always tells the truth to his slaves whom he already completely controls (keeping part of their real personality deep down under a ban) so that they know what and how everything happened, since this is part of him that excites him, that such a straight man like him obeys him and he can't do anything to him. Although I like everything that happens. But I hope in the end of this big story, Harold and Harvey will be together and Harvey will be able to put Grain in prison in the future, when it will not be possible to completely subjugate Harvey and Harold will become Harvey's sub.
Dombitch
5/29/25, 1:25 PM
Wow, I've just read the 3 chapters and there were just amazing material, I don't know if you have other variations in mind but they were all so hot in their own way ! thank you for your time and hoping you'll get other hot ideas, I might get addicted at this rate lol
Zander
5/29/25, 12:46 PM
Thanks for the new chapter, hopefully the sequel will come out 🙏soon. It will be as interesting to see Kayna down there as it is to see Torres who is also brainwashed. I hope the next chapter will be about brainwashing Torres and turning him into a slave. I also hope that the next chapter will have pictures, unfortunately there were none in this one.
Testing
5/29/25, 12:38 PM
This story was incredible! Hit, well written, great pacing. Sexy!
5/29/25, 12:23 PM
Really great story as usual. I love how you eased us into it, especially how do you take the time to really lay out an opening prelude to the sex. I have to agree with Stimle about next level writing. I’m waiting to see how these characters play out. Another story in this Eden saga that is ,as usual, totally inventive and unique.
5/29/25, 10:01 AM
So hot! Can’t wait for more