Recent Comments

Dombitch
5/29/25, 1:25 PM
Wow, I've just read the 3 chapters and there were just amazing material, I don't know if you have other variations in mind but they were all so hot in their own way ! thank you for your time and hoping you'll get other hot ideas, I might get addicted at this rate lol
Zander
5/29/25, 12:46 PM
Thanks for the new chapter, hopefully the sequel will come out 🙏soon. It will be as interesting to see Kayna down there as it is to see Torres who is also brainwashed. I hope the next chapter will be about brainwashing Torres and turning him into a slave. I also hope that the next chapter will have pictures, unfortunately there were none in this one.
Testing
5/29/25, 12:38 PM
This story was incredible! Hit, well written, great pacing. Sexy!
5/29/25, 12:23 PM
Really great story as usual. I love how you eased us into it, especially how do you take the time to really lay out an opening prelude to the sex. I have to agree with Stimle about next level writing. I’m waiting to see how these characters play out. Another story in this Eden saga that is ,as usual, totally inventive and unique.
5/29/25, 10:01 AM
So hot! Can’t wait for more
Alex
5/29/25, 8:22 AM
Big fan of cigar stories on here, hope there’s still more to come!
5/29/25, 8:06 AM
I can’t believe I haven’t come across this story earlier. Very hot and strangely unique for me.
5/29/25, 7:19 AM
Hot, I like the addition of the couple.
5/29/25, 6:56 AM
The storyline surprised me - in a good way. I’m looking forward to getting to know David Maxwell and his backstory. But the real revelation is the writing: it’s truly next-level. There are lines and phrases I wish I’d thought of (and will be borrowing).
5/22/25, 8:58 PM
Hello i love this story i read it years ago did you plan to continue this story now?

5/25/25, 7:24 PM
@[Bazir](/user/show/911833) Yes it's actually posted in its entirety on AO3 and I'm going to post the other parts here as well! Thank you for reading!

5/29/25, 5:49 AM
@[Switchy Pup](/user/show/949152) i See that i already read i point your story surprise twist at end ahaha