Recent Comments

12/13/23, 12:54 PM
This story doesn't seem to be going anywhere. what was J's issue with D? why didn't the store owner ask them why they were fighting? kind of a strange thing to gloss over.

12/13/23, 8:01 PM
@[musclejunky](/user/show/10019676) Hi musclejunky, thanks for the feedback. I know I have to adjust my shot. I was already thinking of explaining some things in chapter 4. I tried to write to you privately to ask for advice, but I can't find you on the forum.
12/13/23, 7:21 PM
Great story! Hope you continue with it. It has a lot of promise
12/13/23, 6:31 PM
Loving the humiliation. Very hot story!
12/13/23, 3:57 PM
Woooooow my ñame is Alejandro, and I’d really enjoy to have the same fate as him… hottest story ever!
12/1/23, 11:26 PM
Love this. Will there be a part 2?

12/2/23, 3:10 AM
@[gotacoolname](/user/show/234002) Debating it.

12/13/23, 2:20 PM
@[Alpha Artemis](/user/show/1997819) Think it's worth a part 2. Much to be done with the dad - what if he finds out about his son? What then?
12/13/23, 6:50 AM
Now I soooo wished I had sensitive nipples!… Thanks for this story. So well written, and such a treat for a Talley fan like me! There’s sunshine and strength in that glorious summer of love. And that’s a brilliant streak of hope. Lots of pillowy hugs to you!

12/13/23, 2:01 PM
@[Yunnick](/user/show/10001783) You and me both! Nipples this sensitive are probably more of a fantasy than a reality, but it was still hot to write about how good they felt for Talley. It’s always great bringing Talley back into the picture. His saga is certainly the longest I’ve written so far, and he has a lot left to go through. I’m looking forward to writing more. Thanks for reading!
12/13/23, 12:50 AM
I came to this site to jerk off, not to cry! In all seriousness, really outstanding job Soren. You've been talking about this vignette for some time and I'm really happy to see it published and out in the open so everyone can read this work. A perfect blend of loss, wanting, and hope, topped with your outstanding detailed sex scenes and depictions of the male body. Very well done, Soren! You should be proud!

12/13/23, 1:26 PM
@[Franco Apollo](/user/show/10029736) I’m glad it’s coming across as I wanted! It’s so great to hear that all this work was worth it and has produced something that can touch someone while deliberately still being smut. Thanks for the read!
11/20/20, 12:43 AM
Thank you so much for all the nice comments so far. I would especially like to thank those of you who read something different to give it a try. It was fun to try writing a transformation story and I feel I have it a fresh twist. I enjoy them a lot myself, and normally what I like the most is the confusion and fear right when the transformation kicks in. But, I found when I went to write this, that instead the character had already given up *completely* and so his one regret was just that he couldn't finish giving the blowjob he so desperately wanted. (If it's not clear, he's actually not *truly* inanimate, someone else added that tag.) It is kind of a quickie story, and a bit rushed, but I just needed to get something out to lubricate the creative pipes a bit. And since it's been brought up already I will tell you that the Mysterious Boyfriend X series is what I am currently working on: more parts as well as a freshening up the original three parts.

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12/13/23, 5:16 AM
@[Nocturne13](/user/show/263497) I cannot praise this story enough! I have shared it with so many people because this is about a close to the perfect transformation as I have read! The build was absolutely amazing and Scotty's NEED was palpable! I would love to see the Liquidator continue and maybe hunt down a leather jacket or pants for his next match. Gotta look the part of a viillain after all. Hell, I'd even commission it if that would help get a little more in this story world! Thank you again!

12/13/23, 6:51 AM
@Anonymous Oh wow sharing the story is really appreciated. I don't know when I'll have time to ever get back to this one unfortunately, though I had thought it would be nice to write the prequel where Roger acquires the pink hoodie. If you've read the story multiple times you probably figured out that the hoodie was previously his now missing competitor.
12/13/23, 6:01 AM
Definitely another great chapter. Finally my requests were answered and we discovered Dexter's reaction to Chad's declaration of love. And I'm officially loving Dexter. THERE, I SAID IT!!!

12/13/23, 6:16 AM
@[Sexcrab](/user/show/10027159) Yeah, definitely been thinking how to do that part. It took several chapters since I can't insert it earlier.
12/13/23, 3:43 AM
hot hot hot!!