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12/10/23, 2:40 AM
Is there a reason why we don't see the symbiotic form of 005 appear? Because I recognize from the previous chapters that symbiotes talk in **bold text**, what happened? Additionally, I am curious as what the mixed consciousness of the human host and the drone symbiote is like. By merging, do the previous identities "vanish" to create something new? Is there a way to tell which one is more in control? etc. etc.

12/10/23, 5:23 PM
@[temporaryhotsaucetofu](/user/show/10034005) I think the symbiote does make a kind of appearance in the voices 05 starts to hear as he's repeating his mantras. And maybe it doesn't say anything more because it doesn't need to. Archie put the collar on himself, remember, so the persuasive talk the symbiote might otherwise make is unnecessary. On the other, we haven't spent any real time in the head of a fully converted drone yet, so we can only guess.
12/8/23, 9:07 PM
It's odd to say this about a story with these elements, but besides the expected hotness, horniness-inducing, etc., there was an odd ribbon of innocence running through the entire story. The main character knew wh5at's what. He was not an innocent by any means, but this was so wholesome on certain level. I think it was mostly due to the writing. It may have been the setting - it seemed like it was set in England. Where you can have a murder every week and as long as it's solved by a little old lady- who has connections to EVERYBODY and...sorry where was I! Seems like home spun style to tell a pervy tale. I liked it.

12/10/23, 5:04 PM
@[MiketheDronish](/user/show/10044078) Hey, thanks for the comment. My personal obsession is how, given the right circumstances, just perverted 'normal' men can be. The dad debuaches his son out of boredom in the first place rather than any particular intention, and then whores his boy out to a man who is a bit more sinister. Whether the boy is innocent or not, he loves whats happenning and encourages his dad to keep going further and everyone gets what they want
Anonymous
11/19/23, 10:48 AM
New Chapter when?

X
11/23/23, 4:50 PM
@Anonymous Updates? @AvionneX

11/24/23, 5:40 AM
@X Maybe by first week of next month. No promises though.

JX
12/4/23, 6:11 PM
@[avionneX](/user/show/1683719) Any chance you’ll drop a hint on what comes next?

12/5/23, 12:03 AM
@JX 80% chance I'll release the next chapter this weekend. :wink: No need for hints.

JX
12/8/23, 5:54 AM
@[avionneX](/user/show/1683719) New chapter tonight? or Saturday?

X
12/9/23, 12:32 PM
@[avionneX](/user/show/1683719) Update tonight?

12/9/23, 12:33 PM
@X Tomorrow night.

JX
12/10/23, 4:19 PM
@[avionneX](/user/show/1683719) New update tonight?

12/10/23, 4:22 PM
@JX I've submitted already. Pending for admin approval. :slightly_smiling_face:
12/10/23, 11:52 AM
Wonderful work. Nice shifting focuses and how their inner workings are laid out.

12/10/23, 3:48 PM
@[Kyle Cicero](/user/show/10023983) Thank you! :D
12/10/23, 12:23 PM
This is really hot
12/10/23, 9:53 AM
that's just beautiful, the passing of the torch
12/10/23, 9:28 AM
Fuck dude. That was hot. I wonder how it would be if he was still homophobic but wanting to do all those acts. Like some sort of cognitive dissonance.
12/10/23, 9:23 AM
Amazing as always
Anonymous
12/10/23, 6:31 AM
new chapter !
12/10/23, 5:31 AM
Powerfull and hot, good writing.