Incredible!!!

I'm honestly not sure what to make of Tommy's homophobia. It *feels* like it's supposed to be the central focus of the plot, but then it's basically 90% resolved in the first chapter. If the tone were more comedic, then I'd understand needing to sideline the main conflict so the raunchy "team bonding exercises" and whatnot could get underway, but as things are I'm just kind of scratching my head here.

Hit buttons for sure. I can see others who don't have those buttons feeling a bit baffled but... well they're the ones missing out.

Isn't this one fun? There's so much to unpack here. In Jamie's dream, we get to see inside Dusk's head and into his past. We have his confrontation with his former mentor, and Dusk helping to make sure that "fucker got what he deserved," as Dusk so eloquently put it in Chapter 2. Then there's Minotaur's admissions regarding the incident that sent Midnight over the edge, followed by Midnight's bargain with Master, and the beginning of his true submission and slavery to Master. The next part puts us squarely back in Jamie's unhappy present, where he's trying to make sense of what he just dreamt. There's another confrontation between Jamie and Kane about the escapade of a new Villain or Vigilante. And the irony is that neither knows that the new supe on the block was in fact Jamie, and the event described in Cape News is Jamie's likely future starting to take shape. The League may have an idea, though, because in comes Mentat to interrogate Jamie, with more than a hint of creepiness. The final elevator scene wraps it up so neatly. First Mentat confesses that he (and by extension the Tribunal) now sees Jamie as lost, and fit only to bait a trap for Master. Like that'll work. It does sort of lead one to think that maybe the League **hasn't** cottoned on to who the new "villain" really is, because if they had, would they actually risk letting Master get to keep him? The closer is Mentat blackmailing Claymore, seemingly just because he can. You gotta wonder what's up with that. But it does establish that yet another one of the League's leading "heroes" is as evil as any supervillain. Of the four we've seen so far, the best one is the self-centered, glory chasing jackal, Valour. We haven't yet met Dauntless in person, but given that he is the founder of this fundamentally corrupt organization, and the utter nastiness of his cohorts on the Tribunal, it's impossible to think he'll be any better when we finally do. I can hardly wait to see what comes next. Thank you Neon Demon!

Very hot inflation and balloon transformation has been recently very alluring and this definitely hit those buttons perfectly

I really liked this one! I would have loved to see more of his partners reaction to what was going on. Also would be good to see more of the hypnotists escapades. Great story 😁

I love the mind control aspect and the fact that the man's step-son is a brown-skinned Indian whom he hypnotizes to be a boi where. Almost like he's pimping the boy out for other white men to enjoy. Also, the involuntary discovery of pleasure is always a real turn-on.

Anytime you post a story, I quickly click, read, and cum! Can't get enough.

Perfect ! The telemarketer idea is really great and the building is amazing

He is now dumb and simple, like an animal, without posessions. Would love to see how he lives like a caveman in the Backyard of his master, with all the other victims :D