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12/6/23, 11:27 PM
The hypnosis is very subtle, but it’s implied. I can’t help but wonder what’s being said in all of those couch conversations!
John
12/6/23, 10:54 PM
"Hmm, something off about the hunk people in this city." Said a private detective.
12/6/23, 9:56 PM
... how you casually explain that he will be keeping the load.... and allowing the fart to ease the cramp... but in the end .... holding the load. Hot hot hot.
12/6/23, 9:41 PM
I've not read a second chapter then desperately looked for the first. I'm so impressed by these results. I can feel the beta and love the feeling. Its hot. The alpha is somewhat outside of the story from our perspective. You successfully made the reader a comfortable beta laying on our tummies even if we might usually jackhammer our prey. Hot.
12/6/23, 9:23 PM
The story is unique in many ways. We don't necessarily have a sci-fi element, hypnosis, nor coercion. Instead, we have a submissive beta who learns much later that he is actually one. While degrading, he only gets hotter in the moment. You have the alpha sort of on the sideline coming into the story at times but always overriding. The alpha leaving the keys on the counter caught me as so simple but utterly hot. The fully clothed man ripping the clothes off his rightfully contained boy-pussie is hot... then against the wall. Thanks.
12/6/23, 3:42 PM
A bit dark, but awesome!:smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

12/6/23, 9:22 PM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) And this one chapter was only the setting... I have to take some time to build the character in the mindset I wanted before all... and at some point will be a bit darker and sad for one of this guys... tbh not sure how that happened 😅
12/6/23, 8:41 PM
An incredible story! I'm glad they loved the changes!
12/6/23, 7:07 PM
more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
12/6/23, 5:45 PM
Fuck me that’s a hot chapter. Definitely keep adding to this story. My dripping cock really enjoyed it.
12/6/23, 4:10 PM
I wonder if the Wolf will be turned too

12/6/23, 4:51 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) Stay tuned! I can confirm that he will feature again ...

12/6/23, 4:58 PM
@[Ciriii](/user/show/10002839) Thank you, also, I am enjoying the series so far