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12/6/23, 12:31 PM
Another hot installment. Again, the descriptions were brilliantly vivid in all the right ways and places. The way you describe big dicks bursting out of unzipped trousers just works for me. I would though also agree with other comments about images. I found going away from the story to look at them broke up the rhythm and it would have been better for me if they had been on the page with the text. I hope you keep these stories coming. The series is a real Christmas treat for me.

12/6/23, 2:26 PM
@[Loxley](/user/show/75942) Thank you I'm really pleased you enjoy it. The images are a problem I agree...I am torn because I love to include images and in a way they direct my story a bit. Do you know of another way to get them acessible. Unfortunately the storage on here isn't enough for the amount I like to include haha
12/6/23, 12:39 PM
Too bad Noone started any WS
12/6/23, 11:45 AM
I’ve went back and added some paragraph breaks, copying and pasting it removed them. Thanks for your comments everyone!
12/6/23, 9:43 AM
Can't wait to read another chapter
12/6/23, 8:20 AM
Same thoughts as the first commenter! Another fun story but I definitely prefer the images being embedded in the story itself. Also, if it’s possible, I’d work on the formatting of the text itself as well. You’ve got some very long paragraphs that don’t always read well on mobile especially. I’d be more than happen to beta-read for you and make suggestions before you post. But no worries if not! It’s a great series so far!

12/6/23, 8:28 AM
@[Kibble The Satyr](/user/show/10010407) I understand totally but I'll quickly run out of storage if I include them in the text. I enjoy adding the pictures to spice up the story but also they inspire me in the direction of the story. I was also thinking that not everyone wants to see an image so this way they have the option not to click. Thanks for the offer :) the paragraphs didn't look so long on a laptop haha I'll see what I can do next time.
12/5/23, 9:44 PM
I am glad you enjoyed this segment! Hoping you will enjoy the rest that is to come.

12/6/23, 7:39 AM
@[Drone NG5](/user/show/681310) Thank you! This unit finds immense joy in seeing the men of Drone World lose more and more of their humanity on their way to becoming Master Jake's drones, and it is curiously awaiting the fate of the two specialists in particular.
12/6/23, 3:29 AM
Just read through the entire series and oh my god do you have a wonderful story here, love the progression throughout and happy to see skippy really beginning to get into his new role~ Looking forward to see how the rest of the story plays out!
12/6/23, 3:27 AM
It was a sweet story and I like the premise but for two editing issues. Paragraphs are important not only to make it easier to read but also identify the speaker. There were times I had to re-read a sentence to see who was talking and who was replying. I would also love to know more about the founders, how they found the magic, how they accumulated the wealth and passed both on and why. And more details about the graduating class and how they chose the pledge class. It's a well written story and you've left yourself openings for a prequel and sequel. Just work on the formatting. Otherwise. Nice characters, good description of their emotional evolution and in general, a gentle and nice story!!
Anonymous
12/6/23, 3:25 AM
Hottest chapter yet 🔥🔥🔥🔥
12/6/23, 1:38 AM
I needed some bald fic badly for months, bless you for this. My favorite part honestly, is them going back and embracing it voluntarily. They've discovered their true selves~