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12/6/23, 8:20 AM
Same thoughts as the first commenter! Another fun story but I definitely prefer the images being embedded in the story itself. Also, if it’s possible, I’d work on the formatting of the text itself as well. You’ve got some very long paragraphs that don’t always read well on mobile especially. I’d be more than happen to beta-read for you and make suggestions before you post. But no worries if not! It’s a great series so far!

12/6/23, 8:28 AM
@[Kibble The Satyr](/user/show/10010407) I understand totally but I'll quickly run out of storage if I include them in the text. I enjoy adding the pictures to spice up the story but also they inspire me in the direction of the story. I was also thinking that not everyone wants to see an image so this way they have the option not to click. Thanks for the offer :) the paragraphs didn't look so long on a laptop haha I'll see what I can do next time.
12/5/23, 9:44 PM
I am glad you enjoyed this segment! Hoping you will enjoy the rest that is to come.

12/6/23, 7:39 AM
@[Drone NG5](/user/show/681310) Thank you! This unit finds immense joy in seeing the men of Drone World lose more and more of their humanity on their way to becoming Master Jake's drones, and it is curiously awaiting the fate of the two specialists in particular.
12/6/23, 3:29 AM
Just read through the entire series and oh my god do you have a wonderful story here, love the progression throughout and happy to see skippy really beginning to get into his new role~ Looking forward to see how the rest of the story plays out!
12/6/23, 3:27 AM
It was a sweet story and I like the premise but for two editing issues. Paragraphs are important not only to make it easier to read but also identify the speaker. There were times I had to re-read a sentence to see who was talking and who was replying. I would also love to know more about the founders, how they found the magic, how they accumulated the wealth and passed both on and why. And more details about the graduating class and how they chose the pledge class. It's a well written story and you've left yourself openings for a prequel and sequel. Just work on the formatting. Otherwise. Nice characters, good description of their emotional evolution and in general, a gentle and nice story!!
Anonymous
12/6/23, 3:25 AM
Hottest chapter yet 🔥🔥🔥🔥
12/6/23, 1:38 AM
I needed some bald fic badly for months, bless you for this. My favorite part honestly, is them going back and embracing it voluntarily. They've discovered their true selves~
12/5/23, 9:27 PM
It's a clever idea! I love it!
12/5/23, 8:18 PM
An awesome start! I look forward to more fun.
Will
12/5/23, 6:19 PM
The end of chapter 8 gets me off every time. Hunky Tony - exposed - watching himself on webcam, in just his jockstrap. The dialog is hot here, Tony babbling incoherently in total heat while slowly getting impaled by a cock. Panting, moaning, and hard as a fuckin rock. The fact Tony’s captors make keep his jockstrap on, and cum into the stretched pouch at the end… it’s just icing on the cake - er in this case jock. Hot hot hot!
12/5/23, 6:02 PM
Yikes