Recent Comments

Brody
12/3/23, 10:23 PM
Fantastic story! You are a talented writer, and I like the extreme torments you put your characters through (inescapable, strict bondage; extreme forced foot worship; really sadistic tickling). You are also very creative, and the ear tickling scene was fresh and very hot. The way you described the teasing fingers and the infuriating smile was extremely erotic. Great stuff!

12/3/23, 10:31 PM
@[Brody](/user/show/10005093) Thanks man! Love this comment 👊🏼
12/3/23, 9:29 PM
What a start.......PLEASE continue
12/3/23, 9:26 PM
One of my favorite stories here. Please, please do a sequel. Or add any other story of yours--it will be gratefully received! A prequel to explain who the Incest Master is controlling Dad and Son "incest drones" and then a sequel when Dad and Son pay a visit to Son's boyfriend--and then maybe the boyfriend's father...
Hazard0707
12/3/23, 9:02 PM
Great work can't to read round two possibly a Dom xformation incoming?
11/28/23, 3:11 PM
Nice. Eager to read the follow-up.

Hazard0707
12/3/23, 9:01 PM
@[Cris Kane](/user/show/38728) Sorry to bother on another persons well written story, but I'd love to read a new Mariposa story. I'm a big fan of both the OP story transformation and yours. If you get an idea for one that is. Thanks for the time <3
12/3/23, 4:02 PM
Amazing and super hot story as always. Congrats!
11/28/23, 11:32 PM
Wonderful story!

12/3/23, 3:48 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Glad you enjoyed it!
9/23/23, 7:17 AM
Love this story! There's so many things I would like to say about it that are positive. The description of the muscles and growth, the tension and build up, the Romantic climax! All of it was beautifully done! The only thing I wish was different, is I don't think the post transformation pictures do these muscle Bulls Justice. But, I still loved being able to see what these guys look like, it really helped with the visual aids.

12/3/23, 3:45 PM
@[darkluster4](/user/show/10001301) I'm so glad you loved it! I had a lot of fun writing out the muscle growth and transformation scenes—especially, funny enough, the one that happened over a phone call. I love me some romantic tension with the plot tension, and I'm glad I was able to weave it together. Honestly, I think you're right about the images! I'm thinking of moving to a model where I link "cast inspiration" pics, but don't actually embed them in the story. Then I can (1) have multiple models that inspired me, but also (2) don't have to force the readers to imagine these characters in a specific way. I'll probably update this soon.
12/3/23, 1:22 PM
a good start will look out for more, but then for me the words rubber/latex gets my attention with a mix of military
12/3/23, 1:16 PM
I really enjoyed this, I hope to see Richard and Luke’s relationship develop further!