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12/2/23, 4:35 PM
These little stories are so fun!

12/3/23, 5:22 AM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) Thanks, I really appreciate it! I honestly didn't think I'd do so many of them at the start of the month, but I've enjoyed how they've come together.
Dec 2, 2023
12/3/23, 4:07 AM
Very good. You even avoided the usual negative aspect of hypnosis stories. Thanks.

12/3/23, 4:55 AM
@[OlrJt](/user/show/10011111) I'm not always that kind to my protagonists. Happy that you liked my nicer side. Thanks for your feedback.
11/30/23, 1:52 AM
This chapter deserved a couple read throughs before commenting. Firstly, loved all the rubber conversions. Especially with the personal insights from Cop 4# and Travis. How is TriHard or even Hank going to use them. Yet it is also clear that several other characters are trying to play their hands. Such as Hank and Burgundy. With Hank it was more subtle in his interactions with Travis. With Burgundy its obviously a bloated and smug sense of righteous patriotism so long as he is in control. Though even if Mom was backed into a corner I hope she still has a card to play with how the boys respond to their respective treatments. Or who knows, maybe a shake up in their dynamic with this new Rodriguez will open new doors. Either way, the stage is being set for a more to come and I am eager for it all. Though unlike several others here, I am of the opinion that TriHard will lose. Unless he comes into play a bit more actively, Hank is going to have too much freedom to 'tweak' the programming as he has with Travis.

11/30/23, 4:34 AM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) Oh, you're not wrong when you say that people are trying to play their hands now! Many of the characters think they're in control right now, but who really is? _Someone_ at least must be heading for a fall,... On the subject of **Tri-Hard** winning, I wonder if it's more a case of people wanting to see our heroes _lose_ instead? All this valiant struggling, only for them to end up as playthings like dear daddy? _Would I do that?_ Thanks again for your observations!

12/1/23, 3:22 AM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) For me personally I like it when the heroes win with a certain level of corruption to them. What's happened to our heroes so far is awesome I think.

12/1/23, 4:12 AM
@[Hypnofiend23](/user/show/2528896) Thanks! I usually go for an ending where the heroes _lose_, but are 'happier' than if they'd won. Actually, it's more like _everyone_ loses,... but, hey! This time we'll have to see where everything falls ;) No one is coming out 'clean',...

12/2/23, 2:04 AM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) I really like the sound of that.

12/3/23, 4:27 AM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) :grin:
12/3/23, 3:46 AM
So is this story already finished before it begins.
12/3/23, 2:29 AM
Another rework! Another successful tightening of events and using what you've built of the world in the future to inform past chapters. Particular representing the lewd, hypersexual nature of pets and Coins and how normal it is. I also love the introduction of some of Aris's pets earlier to ease Jasper into their personalities when he'll inevitably run into them. Oree remains a strong favourite. I love how you write them. So effortlessly charming and seductive. The integrity of the doctor was a nice touch, and Jasper's cunning to answer the question in a way that reduced concerns. Can't wait for chapter 5.
12/2/23, 10:39 PM
Great start! I hope there will be future chapters taking this boy to total submission. Sensitizing nipples is my fetish; but extensive humiliating training is always a turn on.
12/2/23, 10:21 PM
You should do a story where Jason hypnotizes Tim.
Arachnus
12/2/23, 9:40 PM
Keep writing!
Dec 2, 2023
12/2/23, 8:16 PM
Incredible

12/2/23, 9:01 PM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) I'm pleased that it hit the mark for you. Tried to include all the relevant details. After it was submitted, I realized I should have had Timmy feel Mile's beard stubble during those fiery kisses, especially the one on the neck.
12/2/23, 8:14 PM
Really hot story