Recent Comments

12/3/23, 3:46 AM
So is this story already finished before it begins.
12/3/23, 2:29 AM
Another rework! Another successful tightening of events and using what you've built of the world in the future to inform past chapters. Particular representing the lewd, hypersexual nature of pets and Coins and how normal it is. I also love the introduction of some of Aris's pets earlier to ease Jasper into their personalities when he'll inevitably run into them. Oree remains a strong favourite. I love how you write them. So effortlessly charming and seductive. The integrity of the doctor was a nice touch, and Jasper's cunning to answer the question in a way that reduced concerns. Can't wait for chapter 5.
12/2/23, 10:39 PM
Great start! I hope there will be future chapters taking this boy to total submission. Sensitizing nipples is my fetish; but extensive humiliating training is always a turn on.
12/2/23, 10:21 PM
You should do a story where Jason hypnotizes Tim.
Arachnus
12/2/23, 9:40 PM
Keep writing!
Dec 2, 2023
12/2/23, 8:16 PM
Incredible

12/2/23, 9:01 PM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) I'm pleased that it hit the mark for you. Tried to include all the relevant details. After it was submitted, I realized I should have had Timmy feel Mile's beard stubble during those fiery kisses, especially the one on the neck.
12/2/23, 8:14 PM
Really hot story
Dec 2, 2023
Anonymous
12/2/23, 7:34 PM
Awesome idea!

12/2/23, 7:37 PM
@Anonymous So glad you appreciated it. I like that Timmy caused it himself, even if not intentionally. I'd call the conclusion a Happy Ending.
Dec 2, 2023
12/2/23, 1:26 PM
God, this was exceptional.

12/2/23, 4:48 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Thanks so much. I had fun contrasting Timmy's thoughtful narration with Mike's blunt way of speaking. Even more enjoyable was describing T's awakening to a new sexual dynamic.

12/2/23, 6:55 PM
@Throne I don’t know if you had written this as a one off, but I would love to see their relationship develop.

12/2/23, 7:06 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) My stuff is usually stand-alone. However, I may return to these ideas sometime, maybe joining this couple or a different one, later in their relationship. There are so many possibilities about how a dominant guy could deal with his eagerly submissive partner.
12/2/23, 6:15 PM
I love this story! It's one of my favorites that I really enjoy re-reading. Throne, I hope you will write more stories like this where the antagonist interferes with a heterosexual couple's perfect marriage.

12/2/23, 7:00 PM
@[athleticleanmuscle](/user/show/10021490) I've done numerous stories with these themes on Fiction Mania (fictionmania.tv), under the name Throne. There's a brief synopsis accompanying each that you can check or look for words like CUCKOLD and BULLY in the titles. Feedback is always welcome.