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11/28/23, 9:53 AM
The second-person narrative style was quite something. The rarity of it made reading this a little disorienting. Certainly enjoyable though. I very much like the premise. I think human/ antro pairings are quite hot and exciting, but sadly with furry works, it tends to be all-in without humans at all. The mixing is definitely appreciated. I'm really happy I got to see some belly distention. The size difference would certainly give the bottom a bulging belly, but with the added swallowed precum and excessive cum, a stomach filled to overflow was very hot. Excellent story. Loved reading it.
11/28/23, 8:08 AM
Both hot and cute story. Love the domination and the sweetness mix
11/28/23, 7:59 AM
Oh my word! I’ve read all 28 chapters in one night and I’m hooked, there was a bit in the middle when I really should have changed my own diaper but I couldn’t stop reading. Will Oak forgive Skip? Will Alpha Daddy Titan fuck the cum out of Skip? Will there be a pack cuddle puddle? Also I need more Sparky hehehe
11/28/23, 5:16 AM
Love this modern take on Genie/Master story and the well-developed characters. Read up through current and just re-reading + rating this first in the series. Great job! :two_hearts:
11/28/23, 2:15 AM
This is amazing writing, 10/10 - 5 stars! Well-imagined and developed premise-story-characters with my favorite theme: cracking the straight man into choosing to manifest their inner gay whore that loves nothing more than being a mindless fuckslut himbo for other men, endlessly craving and lusting for COCK, powerless to extract themselves from the self-imposed situation regardless of the detriment it causes. I love the undeniable addiction they have to the ring and the thin veil it gives Xander & Charlie to indulge in their deeply intense homosexual affair.
11/28/23, 12:22 AM
Hope this gets continued.
11/27/23, 11:51 PM
Perfect story except for the scat. Also not a fan, but otherwise loved it!
11/27/23, 11:12 PM
Can't wait for more
11/26/23, 11:26 PM
Oh this is hot. Our guy needs to rim and finger and fuck the pastor. Make him see stars! Make him moan in bliss and loose all thoughts but being a good boy. I hope he doesn't publicly ruin the pastor. Much better to keep him public as he us and enjoy him privately for a long while. Hehe

11/27/23, 10:17 PM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) I agree, I also wouldn't like him to humiliate the pastor publicly, only privately, to ensure that the handsome guy serves him with his money, resources and especially his body.
11/27/23, 10:12 PM
I don't know how you did it, but you managed to write an even better and sexier chapter than the first. I especially like how Cole and Patrick's humiliation profiles for the pastor are different enough to believe they were done by different people with different feelings. Patrick's sexual desire for Pastor Frederick mixed with a background of romanticism and good confrontational dialogues did the trick to ensure a great read. Speaking of which, answering your question in the previous chapter, I think you managed to demonstrate, both in chapter 1 and in this one, how despicable Pastor Frederick's opinions are without forgetting Patrick's selfishness and cupidity or the great sociopath that is Cole . Not to mention that Pastor Frederick seems to have these opinions more because he is simple-minded and has a flawed moral character than out of real evil. An exceptionally handsome guy who truly enjoys religious life, but there's no shortage of opportunities (women, money...) tempting him to push him away for true purification. And with a madly horny homosexual in him and full access to his body and mind, it's going to be impossible for the poor guy. And I love it! Looking forward to chapter 3.