Recent Comments

Ben
11/27/23, 3:58 AM
This is amazingly well written and hot 🔥
11/26/23, 11:51 PM
Great ending. Chris and Alex are happy and Robert's plan backfired. Another fun series.
11/26/23, 11:43 PM
wow! That was a hot tale! Jack, I loved the buildup to a fuck would transform him! I see so many new experiences Daniel is going to go through and each one erasing his old self. Hoping there's more to come! Great writing!
HypnoFreak
11/26/23, 7:04 PM
I am so sorry if this any how hurts any one's sentiments and I respect everyone's feelings and thoughts. But, to me this story is just getting out of hand. Like I guess the mind control part of it is fine and even the bullying one, but it's just sounds so evil to me that instead of turning me on, it's making my heart ache. I feel so bad for Jake and JJ and then Vickie too. I don't know what happens in the next episodes cus I haven't read them yet and still am struggling to think if I should read them, but I would really appreciate if this story takes a turn back in the right direction. Again, I am no one to influence or harm someone's feelings. The hard work put here can be easily seen, but this is just a small personal opinion and maybe, just maybe such stories might not be for me. Evilness might turn quite some people on, but for sensitive people like me, it's just very disturbing. It would give me a big relief to know that the story rejoined the right track instead of the evil one.
11/12/23, 7:05 AM
It's the smooth, vernacular writing - no speedbumps hit in reading it - and the delightfully smartass style that hooked me. Looking forward to more of this tale.

11/12/23, 10:09 PM
@[Fingrfethr](/user/show/701382) Heya, thanks! I'm enjoying writing part two up - can't wait to share!

11/26/23, 6:18 PM
@[Fingrfethr](/user/show/701382) Added part 2!
11/2/23, 8:02 PM
Zombies are not my favorite monsters and I am still looking forward to the second chapter!

11/2/23, 8:48 PM
@[StormRaven1217](/user/show/10039204) Y'know, I agree - I wrote the story prompted by the challenge. And so I worked my... brain... to try to think of a monster less commonly seen in an erotic setting, so no witches, werewolves, vampires, ghosts. Couldn't quite manage to make my MC actually "undead," lol - so, voila, my quasi-zombies!

11/26/23, 6:18 PM
@[StormRaven1217](/user/show/10039204) Added part 2!
11/2/23, 4:14 AM
I love this. There's some really engaging world building here and you present the main characters needs and thoughts' in a really clear way.

11/2/23, 2:02 PM
@[Loxley](/user/show/75942) Thanks! Love me some worldbuilding, lol...

11/26/23, 6:18 PM
@[Loxley](/user/show/75942) Added part 2!
10/31/23, 4:03 PM
This was really well done. Can't wait to read more.

11/2/23, 2:02 PM
@[Pwrliftermscl](/user/show/941605) Cool, thanks! I'm enjoying writing the second part - look forward to posting when the Challenge ends!

11/26/23, 6:18 PM
@[Pwrliftermscl](/user/show/941605) Added part 2!
10/30/23, 1:55 PM
Goddamn, the scene with the cumshot and the condoms was smoking. Well done, and a great job on the worldbuilding.

10/30/23, 2:21 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) Thanks - appreciate it! Stay tuned for Part Two!

11/26/23, 6:18 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) Added part 2!
Test
11/26/23, 5:37 PM
This is hot!