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11/27/23, 2:10 PM
Great climax for Jayson and his Harem. I cant wait to read more, especially the other men from this story-verse.
11/25/23, 7:21 PM
Is it wrong that I'm hoping for Tri-Hard will win. The whole rubber army is such a turn on for me

Anonymous
11/25/23, 11:29 PM
@[Redcoma100](/user/show/41857) I don't think "Tri-Hard loses" and "the rubber supersoldier army remains operational" are mutually-exclusive outcomes. I mean, depending on how extensively the brain draining toilets are used, a LOT of these guys are going to be impractical to reintegrate into civilian society, even after Tri-Hard is defeated. And besides, who would *want* to go back to an ordinary life after experiencing the blissful submission and certainty of purpose the soldiers have? At this point I think it's less a question of *whether* there'll be an army of superdrones, and more a question of *who* will be in control of it.

11/25/23, 11:36 PM
@[Redcoma100](/user/show/41857) **Tri-Hard** is definitely on the up. Maybe he will win in the end,... Either way, he'll be bringing more drones soon!

11/25/23, 11:44 PM
@Anonymous Those are some very interesting thoughts and I'm so sorry that I cannot comment on them further. Thank you! Now, get back in your box!:speak_no_evil:

Anonymous
11/27/23, 9:20 AM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) Never! *You* unleashed this kinky beast by creating such an engaging scenario -- now you have to deal with it! And I'm still waiting for Henry to get some proper clothing! He can't just run around without slick, form-fitting rubber coating every inch of his body! It's indecent! Nick has some serious balls to just leave his slave exposed like that. I'm surprised no one's called the cops on them yet!

11/27/23, 10:16 AM
@Anonymous The cops are busy getting the foam off of the remaining members of the squad that ran foul of Travis and **FreeDog** :p
11/27/23, 5:38 AM
Great story and perfect ending !
Ben
11/27/23, 3:58 AM
This is amazingly well written and hot 🔥
11/26/23, 11:51 PM
Great ending. Chris and Alex are happy and Robert's plan backfired. Another fun series.
11/26/23, 11:43 PM
wow! That was a hot tale! Jack, I loved the buildup to a fuck would transform him! I see so many new experiences Daniel is going to go through and each one erasing his old self. Hoping there's more to come! Great writing!
HypnoFreak
11/26/23, 7:04 PM
I am so sorry if this any how hurts any one's sentiments and I respect everyone's feelings and thoughts. But, to me this story is just getting out of hand. Like I guess the mind control part of it is fine and even the bullying one, but it's just sounds so evil to me that instead of turning me on, it's making my heart ache. I feel so bad for Jake and JJ and then Vickie too. I don't know what happens in the next episodes cus I haven't read them yet and still am struggling to think if I should read them, but I would really appreciate if this story takes a turn back in the right direction. Again, I am no one to influence or harm someone's feelings. The hard work put here can be easily seen, but this is just a small personal opinion and maybe, just maybe such stories might not be for me. Evilness might turn quite some people on, but for sensitive people like me, it's just very disturbing. It would give me a big relief to know that the story rejoined the right track instead of the evil one.
11/12/23, 7:05 AM
It's the smooth, vernacular writing - no speedbumps hit in reading it - and the delightfully smartass style that hooked me. Looking forward to more of this tale.

11/12/23, 10:09 PM
@[Fingrfethr](/user/show/701382) Heya, thanks! I'm enjoying writing part two up - can't wait to share!

11/26/23, 6:18 PM
@[Fingrfethr](/user/show/701382) Added part 2!
11/2/23, 8:02 PM
Zombies are not my favorite monsters and I am still looking forward to the second chapter!

11/2/23, 8:48 PM
@[StormRaven1217](/user/show/10039204) Y'know, I agree - I wrote the story prompted by the challenge. And so I worked my... brain... to try to think of a monster less commonly seen in an erotic setting, so no witches, werewolves, vampires, ghosts. Couldn't quite manage to make my MC actually "undead," lol - so, voila, my quasi-zombies!

11/26/23, 6:18 PM
@[StormRaven1217](/user/show/10039204) Added part 2!
11/2/23, 4:14 AM
I love this. There's some really engaging world building here and you present the main characters needs and thoughts' in a really clear way.

11/2/23, 2:02 PM
@[Loxley](/user/show/75942) Thanks! Love me some worldbuilding, lol...

11/26/23, 6:18 PM
@[Loxley](/user/show/75942) Added part 2!