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11/6/25, 6:03 PM
*Très sympa*!!!!:heart_eyes: ça fait plaisir de voir des histoires en Français sur le site de temps en temps, et c'était une approche intéressante aux thèmes.:heartbeat:
11/6/25, 5:15 PM
Hot!!!!:heart_eyes::heart_eyes:
11/6/25, 4:27 PM
Very cool and interesting story! Awesome!:green_heart:
11/6/25, 9:49 AM
Great first chapter, it creates a sense of mystery and a lot of questions about what's going on. I hope future chapters will answer all the questions. The story's beginning is pretty good, even very good 👍. I have a question: is this already a written story? Or is it being written and published only here? I also liked that you started with Green Lantern Hal Jordan. Perhaps when he's broken and rebuilt, he'll help with other goals. But other heroes should notice the disappearance of Hal Jordan and his ring, especially on Oa, where the Guardians may have suspicions about the changes in Hal Jordan (and they can act covertly) so as not to arouse the suspicions of the new Hal Jordan, who will obey his master.

11/6/25, 4:26 PM
@[Zander-1](/user/show/10015044) Thanks, Z. Not all written out yet but I know where I’m headed. It’s only here—this is my first story. Your comments make sense—I will get to his absence in part 2 or 3.
11/5/25, 9:55 PM
😈

11/6/25, 4:24 PM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) 😉
11/6/25, 4:24 PM
It’s a shame you never finish the story and just went on to other stories
11/6/25, 3:47 PM
Quite hot, would really enjoy to see whatJose will do with his own chip.:eyes:
Sep 29, 2023
11/6/25, 3:42 PM
:green_heart::green_heart::green_heart: J'aurais bien voulu que ça soit un peu plus long, mais il y avait une très bonne idée là! :heart_eyes:
Staci39Z1
11/6/25, 3:31 PM
Never a dull moment right. Giggles haha
11/6/25, 8:29 AM
This is quickly becoming one of my all-time favorite reads. Easily in my top ten, and only getting better with each new chapter. Thank you for the work you do, man! Liam almost getting caught by his work friends was especially hot, though I do wonder if Connor put the pieces together and that's why we was so silent.

11/6/25, 3:31 PM
@[HimboVibes](/user/show/10032004) whoa thanks dude, huge compliment fr! i wonder about connor...