Recent Comments

Tom
11/15/23, 10:02 PM
Wow so fucking hot! I hope you continue with this story!

11/16/23, 2:57 AM
@[Tom](/user/show/1813716) Thank you! My plan was for this series to be an anthology actually—so the next story would be a different guy and a different creature on the other side of the portal. But I may return to Justin!

Tom
11/16/23, 8:36 AM
@[FtMA692](/user/show/10043380) Thanks for the reply. I will continue to read this series. Thanks for your contribution!

11/22/23, 12:58 PM
@[FtMA692](/user/show/10043380) Looking forward to seeing what other creatures are waiting beyond the rift for naughty guys, particularly those of the tentacled variety!
Andy D
11/22/23, 12:14 PM
Wow I really enjoyed reading ☺️
11/22/23, 8:33 AM
It's one of the best stories I've read in a long time, deep, complicated, and very intense. It also portrays one of my biggest fantasies, the physical surrender, being controlled, and only being free in thought, and even there, only partially. Perhaps it would be good if they divided the 'chapters' a bit more; it becomes a bit tiring to read so much at once.
Beardfull
11/22/23, 6:41 AM
Great story! It’s been quite sometime since we’ve had a story along this lines! Nothing like a good bear transformation!!! Thanks for all the beard and moustache references!!! Right on spot with my kinks! Please keep wiriting this kind of stories.
11/22/23, 5:03 AM
A very hot start!
11/22/23, 3:37 AM
Incredible story, it has been one of my greatest fantasies, to submit physically but mentally to be partly conscious.
11/22/23, 2:31 AM
well done!! Hoping for a continuation with even more cigars!
11/22/23, 1:14 AM
I look forward to the next part of this story.
11/21/23, 11:05 AM
I really enjoyed the series of dates that were all a test. Creativity levels off the charts, the world is so vivid and detailed. And the plot thickens! I have to read this story slowly, I don't want to catch up and have to wait! A himbo, but smart! A brave new world indeed :laughing:

11/22/23, 12:14 AM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) Thanks. I thought that the test format was kind of fun. I actually wanted to more obviously format the decisions like they were inputs but I thought creating text boxes or something like that would be a little bit overkill.
11/21/23, 7:43 PM
Just read this again. I see Hudson tweeking the app and changing the tops he creates. Maybe he can make them more muscular or fuck on command. He would probably be happier with a harem of muscular drones that top for his financial gain. Agent is a new word for pimp. But is sounds like this pimp could rule the world.