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Rubberdrone
11/20/23, 9:59 AM
Definitely need more of this series.

11/20/23, 3:04 PM
@[Rubberdrone](/user/show/10001726) Thank you. I’ll brainstorm some ideas for another part. If you liked this I have quite a few stories ill be posting in the coming weeks you might enjoy as well
Mikey
11/20/23, 2:58 PM
Hey man, u gonna update this
Vlh
11/20/23, 2:19 PM
Great story! Can you write one about a conservative straight man, forced to wear tights or pantyhose that turns him into a slutty twink that craves cock?
11/20/23, 2:14 PM
People I hope Ben wins for: Logan, Tyler People I hope Ben Loses for: Todd, Chad, Jacob, Lucas, Caleb, Travis I went with the assumption that these are mind controllers so they would win as much as possible, and I went with 6 orgasms. Less if fine, but more doesn't seem fair. Anyway I chose to save Logan and Tyler because they seem like the biggest jerks. Logan is the person who I want to outright outwit the beholders and I hope that he is in the middle of the story. My personal scene idea is that the intelligent fantasy race tried to subdue him and socially pressure him into their clutches but he has none of it and shows them who is boss and instills fear into those that wished to dominate him. I'd make him the 5th person in the story to keep pace after the first winner and to give hope to the last 3 contestants. Who will fail Todd I'm hoping to suffer tremendously and have that personality beaten out of him so I'm giving him the orcs who aren't just immune to his charms but cruel to the bubbly boy as they gape him without his pleasure. Considering the extremity of his fate I'd put him in the later of the story and I think I'll make him 6th Chad I think scales down well and I'd make him drown in ooze. Not death obviously, but I'd make sure his muscles don't work in the ooze, the thing he is happiest about, and they'd just turn him into a cum factory. I'd make Chad the very 1st person Ben loses for since he'd have such high morale with everyone else and losing him early on makes things feel that much more hopeless. Jacob should be subject to the mindflayers. They would probe him and probe him and for his trusting nature, his mind created team would betray him and it would end up with him betrayed and gangbanged. The mindflayers then ask him after a lot of abuse if he is willing to be a slave to people who don't care for him if it means being spared the horrors of his trust constantly violated. On the outside, he'd be an eager trophy slave, inside his head he'd come to resist the actions of the mindflayers with a body that can feel but can't respond to his will. I'd put him as the 8th person of the story since he ties so well with Ben's circumstance. Tyler was my last survivor and I'd make him a hold out. The reason I think he should win other than my primary reason of him being a jerk is that he is too unremarkable to orgasm to. So I'd also pair him with the mimics since out of everyone on the list I think mimics are the things people are least sexually interested in. His reserved nature makes him wise to the chests and they get tired of waiting when his fears are confirmed. They eat him, put him through tentacle hell, but he is very unresponsive because this is all too much for him and he correctly guessed the trap. I'd put him as the 3rd person in the story. Lucas's bisexuality isn't something I'd play with, but if I were to do it, I'd give him a centaur. They'd have feminine faces, smooth bodies without breasts and hairy everything else other than a cock. I'd make the centaurs play with Lucas like a cat plays with a lizard. They'd outrun him, injure him slightly, do it again, this time forcing him to have a small insertion, and on and on he'd escape until he'd have no energy left and the centaur can fuck him hard. He'd say they were arousing before they attack him and then he'd hate the thought of sex forever despite being a cockslave. I think hammering home that the only bisexual hated sex puts everything into place so I'd make him the 2nd person in the story. Caleb seems perfect for the goblins. The harmless tendency to flirt with other guys would be well served here. Or rather the lack of its presence. The biggest actual socialite deserves the biggest crowd and his high energy should be good enough to keep up with demands. Considering this is a gang bang scene I'd say it has a strong orgasm potential by Ben so I'd make it 7th because he'd be tired. I'd have nature dominate Travis, so I'd give him the direwolves. Using that love of nature and turning it into his worst fear. I'd also involve property marking in the form of the penetration and orgasm and then also pissplay. He'd be 4th on the list. Actually, come to think of it, Ben winning Logan's challenge wouldn't work very well since I made him actually get out ahead. So, I'd give it to someone else I guess. Anyway, that's just my suggestions.
Anonymous
11/20/23, 1:49 PM
I want to visit this hotel.
11/20/23, 8:21 AM
Nice chapter, but I also want to ask: what happened to Blane's chapter? As it not on the site anymore

11/20/23, 12:30 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) As far as I can tell, the Blaine chapter should still be up on Tumblr, though I have had some trouble seeing it. I will check to see if I tagged it correctly. The Ezekiel chapter has been automatically flagged as mature on Tumblr and hidden from view.

11/20/23, 12:33 PM
@[Fred W. Kong](/user/show/476663) I will read it there, than, I hope whatever happened here was just a glitch

Martin
11/20/23, 1:11 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) It was approved out of order by accident. @Fred W. Kong submitted all chapters at once, but when approving, we have to make sure to maintain the correct order of chapters. That's why I unapproved the Blane chapter for now, it will come back, as soon as all chapters before are approved.

11/20/23, 1:17 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) I see, that explains everything, thank you

11/20/23, 1:24 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Ah, thanks for explaining Martin! Thank you for spacing out the chapters like this, hope it doesn't create any extra hassle.
HappyTrance
11/20/23, 7:39 AM
Sorry, I forgot to sign my post. Anonymous has taught me to be careful with stating deadlines. But! The next chapter will be out to you all before the end of Thanksgiving break! Thank you all again! It means the world to me that you actually read and like my writing 😊
11/16/23, 10:52 PM
Thank you for your comments Anon123 and Martin! I appreciate your support! To Anonymous, I promise the next chapter is coming! I set an ambitious timeline and have a lot going on that’s slowing me down! I’m working on it though and I hope you’ll keep reading when it comes!

11/17/23, 12:06 AM
@[HappyTrance](/user/show/10003816) I couldn't agree more. Your stories are awesome and I'm really glad you want to continue writing for us. Take your time, keep writing amazing content

Anonymous
11/20/23, 7:24 AM
@[Hypnofiend23](/user/show/2528896) Aww all of these comments make me so happy! I’m glad you all love the story! I will of course keep writing - nothing can keep me from it!
11/20/23, 5:36 AM
Where is the next part?
Nov 19, 2023
11/20/23, 5:32 AM
Love the theme.