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11/20/23, 8:21 AM
Nice chapter, but I also want to ask: what happened to Blane's chapter? As it not on the site anymore

11/20/23, 12:30 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) As far as I can tell, the Blaine chapter should still be up on Tumblr, though I have had some trouble seeing it. I will check to see if I tagged it correctly. The Ezekiel chapter has been automatically flagged as mature on Tumblr and hidden from view.

11/20/23, 12:33 PM
@[Fred W. Kong](/user/show/476663) I will read it there, than, I hope whatever happened here was just a glitch

Martin
11/20/23, 1:11 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) It was approved out of order by accident. @Fred W. Kong submitted all chapters at once, but when approving, we have to make sure to maintain the correct order of chapters. That's why I unapproved the Blane chapter for now, it will come back, as soon as all chapters before are approved.

11/20/23, 1:17 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) I see, that explains everything, thank you

11/20/23, 1:24 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Ah, thanks for explaining Martin! Thank you for spacing out the chapters like this, hope it doesn't create any extra hassle.
HappyTrance
11/20/23, 7:39 AM
Sorry, I forgot to sign my post. Anonymous has taught me to be careful with stating deadlines. But! The next chapter will be out to you all before the end of Thanksgiving break! Thank you all again! It means the world to me that you actually read and like my writing 😊
11/16/23, 10:52 PM
Thank you for your comments Anon123 and Martin! I appreciate your support! To Anonymous, I promise the next chapter is coming! I set an ambitious timeline and have a lot going on that’s slowing me down! I’m working on it though and I hope you’ll keep reading when it comes!

11/17/23, 12:06 AM
@[HappyTrance](/user/show/10003816) I couldn't agree more. Your stories are awesome and I'm really glad you want to continue writing for us. Take your time, keep writing amazing content

Anonymous
11/20/23, 7:24 AM
@[Hypnofiend23](/user/show/2528896) Aww all of these comments make me so happy! I’m glad you all love the story! I will of course keep writing - nothing can keep me from it!
11/20/23, 5:36 AM
Where is the next part?
Nov 19, 2023
11/20/23, 5:32 AM
Love the theme.
11/20/23, 5:16 AM
Oh awesome stuff. Can't wait for more of this.
11/20/23, 3:52 AM
Hot story! He transgressed and lost himself.
11/19/23, 2:45 PM
You do a great job of setting up a hot premise. It's just too bad that ChatGPT isn't really up to the task of generating a sexy story from it. The language here is sometimes so clinical, with lots of passive voice (e.g. "Alex’s cognitive abilities were sharpened") that it felt like I was reading a lab report.

11/19/23, 4:01 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) yes, you are right. it a bit stiff and i got some "hey, this is explicite content we don't like" warning while i worked with it. ;) and it is also not a "just generate me content" thing. on the good side, it is a way to express some things i have in mind and i am personaly not able to express as easy :)

11/20/23, 3:22 AM
@[Lexorius](/user/show/13475) Definitely agree with Hypnothrill; ChaptGPT isn't a great writer, but it got ideals down that both you and I have had. So yet again you give me another scenario to write and put my own spin on it. We definitely need to collaborate on one of these projects.
11/20/23, 3:13 AM
Really hoping we get regular chapters of this again
11/20/23, 3:01 AM
What happened when they robbed the bank did they go to jail