I want my next field trip to be to the HIMBO factory!

Bravo! That was brilliant. I didn’t want to stop. Had to get some sleep my first time. Went right back to it when I woke this AM. You demonstrated incredible talent with the way you played with psychology. Hope will hear more from you in the future.

This is super hot.

There's something both tender, horrifying, erotic, and anguished in this passage, short as it is. The initial scene where the scribe (Thomas) is busy trying to figure out what is happening is a starting prelude for what is to come. The idea of the the two brothers seems at once alluring and terrifying- it's likely Thomas had known them for years so to suddenly see their behavior change this way causing him terror makes sense. The initial sense of him actually having fallen in love with Elias is both heartbreaking and soft. It's clear that Elias likely treated Thomas well before all of this- I doubt Thomas would have fallen for him if he didn't. At the same time, there is still the element of betrayal that we see at the end where it's clear Elias has become a tool of the plant- where he forcibly has Thomas drink. At the same time, if Elias is still there- it may be that he pities Thomas and wishes for him to be with them- in a twisted way, that show of force was him wanting to show Thomas greater pleasure- that he wanted to save him and make him not hurt anymore. Or maybe the plant has fully taken him. The initial scene with the wine is both interesting in how it treads the line between soft and eerie. It's clear that Thomas and Elias are simply sharing a drink and having a candid conversation, but the mention of sweetness is an allusion to the wine and the nature of the conversation as much as it is to other means- based on the almost drug like affect it induced in Thomas- I can assume Elias ejaculated into it- if his penis and it's associated system are more or less plant like, it would make sense that the ejaculate is something akin to sap or nectar as you have done. And the initial scene that starts out looking like a master and willing servant as Thomas is seduced by the man he loved quickly takes a turn into the macabre when he realizes just what the plant wants- and it's likely here that Thomas might be frightened that Elias is no longer himself. It's a moment of bravery that Thomas tries to fight because he doesn't want to hurt anybody- but even as he voices this- Elias is far too gone- in his mind if he gives the others pleasure shouldn't they be happy to submit? And that isn't wrong- but Thomas makes clear that it's about choice- even as he succumbs. But that scene where Thomas is scraping on the ground trying to escape must have been heart wrenching for him- to know the man who you loved and his sons have become maddened when they took good care of you is likely a horrible thing to witness. At the same time, we see Thomas eventually assimilate itself into the plant- its both a relief and a horror. Thomas's line that he knows he's becoming a monster but wants to escape the pain- lured by the promise of being able to have whatever he desires- is both tragic and sensible- he wants freedom and is so blinded by the horror he's faced he'll do whatever to get it- even if it means the end of who he is now. Yet as horrible as it is, him looking upon Elias with awe and reverence seems to imply that while his body may no longer be his own- perhaps some part of him still remains. Perhaps that is a consolation- but perhaps it's something to mourn. Some part of him and the affection he felt for Elias can continue. I see in this a mirror inverse to your stories about the demon princes. In that, it's very clear that despite the dark nature of the princes, they truly do love the ones they have enthralled- they do not seek to harm them and try to restrain yourselves- but as we see in the second act of that series, as much as some of them do not want to puppet their lovers, it seems almost inevitable- yet despite this there is a sense of wanting to care for their human lovers. Here, perhaps it is the same- Elias may have truly believed that in order to truly show Thomas the love and care he deserves- and to reward him for his loyalty- he must do this. Yet at the same time, there is far more betrayal here than there- at least with the princes, they do not truly seek harm- I think they have enough sense amidst their desire for domination that they won't go completely mad. Hopefully. I do hope that whatever the ending, perhaps these two can come to some level of resolution. As much as Elias and Thomas are enthralled by the plant, I'd like to hope that while Elias might not regret the assimilation (I don't think that's possible at this point), he might regret how it was done. But then again, maybe I'm looking at this the wrong way. I've always had a bad habit of thinking about stories like these in context of the emotions present between the characters rather than simply the erotic aspects (which were very well done and enthralling)- so stories like these become erotic just as much as they become tragic- there was this one story that involved people being devoured by melons and being turned into replicas akin to the movie "the thing" as the original person is left a husk- with one part of that detailing how a man lost his lover to them and was then turned into one even as he sought to flee. There is pleasure amidst the horror, but the horror is there nonetheless. But of course, this is your story, and you are the one with the reigns. It may be that Elias's feeling of being the master of the house may have been corrupted by the plant- and based on it's whispers- it may grant and whisper of untold pleasure but at a heavy price- I am reminded somewhat of Slaanesh in this. But then again, perhaps I am entirely wrong about everything. This was intriguing to read nonetheless.

Just a comment to let the author know I loved this story. It's really good. Thank you for writing and sharing it. The characters, themes, plot and the concept of how everything works are all great. I hope a lot more gets written into that notebook!

Very hot. I wouldn't have minded a slower pace. Seems like the story was over so fast. I know raceplay is a taboo kink but I enjoyed this one since it wasn't too hard on the racial elements. Can't wait to see what you do next.

So fricking hot!!!!!!

Totally hot! Keep going this way and it will have a permanent place in my fantasies!

I hope he was wearing those silky track shorts, eventually used as a cum rag and shoved into his mouth.

Love this series and I'm excited for the upcoming stories. :)