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Nov 19, 2023
11/20/23, 5:32 AM
Love the theme.
11/20/23, 5:16 AM
Oh awesome stuff. Can't wait for more of this.
11/20/23, 3:52 AM
Hot story! He transgressed and lost himself.
11/19/23, 2:45 PM
You do a great job of setting up a hot premise. It's just too bad that ChatGPT isn't really up to the task of generating a sexy story from it. The language here is sometimes so clinical, with lots of passive voice (e.g. "Alex’s cognitive abilities were sharpened") that it felt like I was reading a lab report.

11/19/23, 4:01 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) yes, you are right. it a bit stiff and i got some "hey, this is explicite content we don't like" warning while i worked with it. ;) and it is also not a "just generate me content" thing. on the good side, it is a way to express some things i have in mind and i am personaly not able to express as easy :)

11/20/23, 3:22 AM
@[Lexorius](/user/show/13475) Definitely agree with Hypnothrill; ChaptGPT isn't a great writer, but it got ideals down that both you and I have had. So yet again you give me another scenario to write and put my own spin on it. We definitely need to collaborate on one of these projects.
11/20/23, 3:13 AM
Really hoping we get regular chapters of this again
11/20/23, 3:01 AM
What happened when they robbed the bank did they go to jail
11/20/23, 2:35 AM
Wird es je eine Fortsetzung geben?
11/20/23, 2:15 AM
Any more to this one? sprsizeme@yahoo.com
11/19/23, 10:30 PM
I want my next field trip to be to the HIMBO factory!

11/19/23, 11:38 PM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) Sounds like a good idea to me too!
Mark Harrington
11/19/23, 9:27 PM
Bravo! That was brilliant. I didn’t want to stop. Had to get some sleep my first time. Went right back to it when I woke this AM. You demonstrated incredible talent with the way you played with psychology. Hope will hear more from you in the future.

11/19/23, 9:58 PM
@Mark Harrington Wow thank you so much! I have so many other stories here. You will hear back from me eventually.