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5/28/25, 10:15 AM
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5/28/25, 9:54 AM
I'm curious to see where this goes next!
4/18/25, 7:07 PM
Hi guys, I'm happy to announce I recovered from Mononucleosis and am currently writing chapter 2, thank you for reading! Hope you enjoy "The Initiation" cuming soon.

5/7/25, 1:06 AM
@[Grand__Poobah](/user/show/10042526) Yes I can’t wait!!!

narkina69
5/15/25, 5:40 AM
@[Grand__Poobah](/user/show/10042526) Ah amazing! Hope to see it soon!!!

overXCsty
5/21/25, 6:27 AM
@[Grand__Poobah](/user/show/10042526) PLEASEEEEEEE

Asdfk
5/24/25, 3:27 AM
@[Grand__Poobah](/user/show/10042526) Soon I hope? :)

Anonymous
5/28/25, 8:00 AM
@[Grand__Poobah](/user/show/10042526) I NEED to see what happens next!!!
5/23/25, 12:30 PM
Jack, I always wonder how you will outdo yourself and you always do

5/28/25, 7:51 AM
Amazing, Jack. Thanks. 🔥🔥🔥
5/28/25, 6:41 AM
Mysterious, ominous and hot at the same time. I can't wait for the next chapter.
5/28/25, 6:35 AM
Way to go Bryan!
5/28/25, 3:58 AM
Great start
Zander
5/28/25, 2:35 AM
I also hope that Ryan will be saved at the end of the story along with his sons.
Zander
5/28/25, 2:35 AM
Great story, I like the slow burn and the pace of the story) I hope there will be more control, sex and blowjob under the table when one of Luke's colleagues will suck Vale's big dick in his presence without suspecting it, and there will also be more foot fetish. Or Ryan services Vale's dick (under the table) when one of his sons is looking for him when he doesn't come home or they come to a job interview. I wonder what will happen next in the story and I hope it will develop further.
5/27/25, 9:43 PM
Good art is worth the wait. Never apologize for the process of creation. This story is too good to rush!

5/28/25, 1:01 AM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) This is high praise, coming from you, my friend! Thank you!