Recent Comments

11/16/23, 12:13 AM
Every chapter is a gem.
Nov 11, 2023
Anonymous
11/16/23, 12:07 AM
I love premises like this and I loved the description of mixed feelings after realising he wasn't gay before. Great story!
11/15/23, 8:20 PM
Another great chapter our Johnny has found his place.
11/15/23, 5:58 PM
The next chapter sounds like its going top be a very interesting read. To see the roles reversed between drones and everyone else. Are the drones allowed some sort semblance of personality to take fuller advantage of this? And is Master Jake going to place suggestions into anyone to make them into more of the advanced drones? Definitely going to be interesting.
11/15/23, 4:16 PM
I love that you're continuing this story, which is one of my faves! I'm just not sure about telling it from Rocco's perspective. Part of what made the story so effective is the way we get inside the transforming subject's mind as he becomes Stepfordized.
Oct 29, 2023
11/15/23, 2:12 AM
Insanely hot. Just one question: are they really father & son? I wasn’t sure from the way it started.

11/15/23, 4:15 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) They begin as step-dad/step-son, but as the bond grows, they become father and son.
Oct 29, 2023
11/15/23, 1:49 AM
This is great. I love the progression and writing style. Hopeful for another chapter.

11/15/23, 4:14 PM
@[JVill](/user/show/10030603) Thanks for the vote of confidence! I think I know exactly where I want to take this. It involves his son's friend.
Oct 29, 2023
EntrancedGay92
11/5/23, 7:36 PM
Beautiful and intimate, a perfect father/son relationship.

11/15/23, 4:13 PM
@[EntrancedGay92](/user/show/171924) Thank you! The style is kind of a departure for me, but I really enjoyed writing it.
11/12/23, 6:32 AM
Great premise! I love the idea of a gym where the buddies help each other out like that. Always love cumming out resistance too. Nice touch! Thanks for posting your story!

Anonymous
11/15/23, 12:55 PM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) Thanks. I love the the idea of climax as an event horizon, a point of no return.
11/15/23, 8:43 AM
Very hot! I totally enjoy how Aladin mind get twisted. Loved it! More Aladdin & Jafar please! Would love to see how Alladdin gets little by little more trained and enslaved by every meeting with Jafar.