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5/27/25, 9:26 PM
Amazing story. very well written. And the slow overwhelming of the boys and the explanations of the mechanics behind are gorgeous
5/27/25, 12:14 PM
Although a short chapter, it was still exciting with putting some leathermen to sleep! It looks like Professor Rosenwave and his two assistants might escape from the clutches of the Fiends. But what will become of the various Fiend sons? Looking forward to the next chapter, SleepyAsh!!

5/27/25, 9:25 PM
@[Profguy15](/user/show/920341) The good Professor is off to new adventures now! :grin: but he will definitely be returning to future stories :P
Anonymous
5/27/25, 9:01 PM
Great start to the story but why not just call it what it is chloroform. Sleepy stories are definitely great when you go into the details that you did about the chloroform been administered

5/27/25, 9:10 PM
@Anonymous The site changed its rules , writers can’t use chloroform in stories anymore as it can be used in real life

5/27/25, 9:18 PM
@Anonymous That used to be the case, however due to changes in the site's rules, use of named real-life drugs is not accepted. To keep posting new chapters of the story, I changed it to :sparkles: glorochlorm :sparkles: I am very sorry if this negatively impacts the reading experience :(
5/27/25, 8:38 PM
I think it’s a pretty good concept, and the story is not bad. Everything happens so fast not a criticism just an observation. Why not take your time to spin out the story a bit more to capture what the “hero”is thinking as well
5/26/25, 12:28 PM
wow worth the wait, maybe Dr Brown should not have put his trust in SF-08 without taking away its ability for free thinking. But SF-08 was right and Dr Brown now known as Drone Master is a great improvement - Even the Dr Agrees

5/27/25, 6:32 PM
@[MalSkin](/user/show/131172) Thanks for the kind words.
Zander
5/27/25, 1:12 PM
Ideally, this is the finale or will there be a continuation.

5/27/25, 6:31 PM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) Thanks for following my story for so many chapters. I have not decided, yet, whether to continue here or maybe start a new series with the Doctor as drone master. What would you prefer? And what should he do first with all these possibilities?
5/27/25, 4:47 PM
This twists really stands out in the series
5/27/25, 7:59 AM
Fantastic story! Please keep it on, maybe during the week the twins could try a double fuck on their horny coach....

5/27/25, 3:18 PM
@[Xmale06](/user/show/10053174) Good idea, the twins have plenty of things in mind for their coach!
5/26/25, 12:40 PM
Another great chapter! Can't wait for more.

5/27/25, 3:18 PM
@[1992pt](/user/show/501718) Thanks for reading and commenting!
5/26/25, 3:36 AM
Wonderful chapter. It's steamy and delightful and builds well on what you've already written. I'm excited for the next chapter. One question, I don't recall Zeke being mentioned in chapter 1 when Bart and Charles named the staff. Did he take the place of either Stan or Tom? Or did Bart and Charles not know Zeke?

5/26/25, 3:07 PM
@[OtterBear92](/user/show/995167) I renamed Stan to Zeke because I was worried everybody's names were sounding a little too similar- Bart and Charles were intentionally named that way, but I thought I had too many "A" sounds in the cast, so I decided to give Stan a new name, since he hadn't been introduced on-page yet, but forgot to edit the first chapter to correct it. That's what happens when you post a continuous story in a serial format!

5/27/25, 3:10 PM
@[ParadoxBear](/user/show/10002417) Awesome! Thank you for clarifying ☺️. It's really great and I love the change. Just wanted to be sure I wasn't going insane. 🥰