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Nov 22, 2006
mic
11/14/23, 5:57 PM
fucking hot ideas cool story, please more
11/13/23, 2:51 PM
Haven't given up on this, no worries! Life is just slightly overwhelming with limited time to just sit and write. Work, obligations, the need to relax, and getting sick this week have slowed my progression, but I'll be back to writing soon!

11/13/23, 3:47 PM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Nothing is important than health, take care of yourself :)

11/13/23, 5:23 PM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Take care of yourself first and get well soon! While we're all eager for more of your hot writing, but I fully understand that you have your own priorities too. So no rush at all. I'd rather you get back in good shape first so you have a fresher mind to give us the best of your wild ideas! :wink:

11/14/23, 5:14 PM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Take care, as much as I can't wait to see what set of humiliations is in store for Luke and Bryan, your health should come first!
11/14/23, 5:02 PM
Damn hot story guy go on whit it 😈🔥😍
mic
11/14/23, 4:53 PM
wow so hot, love the ideas, please more, hope they film him, sell his ass, take his money from his wallet,and have a lot of young new guys who want to learn to be cleaners
11/14/23, 3:15 PM
My favorite combination: mind control and corruption. Perfect. Thank you.
Sep 28, 2023
sho
9/28/23, 11:06 AM
Nice, a singaporean story. Want to chat on Discord about some kinky Singaporean scenarios? sho9860

11/14/23, 2:16 PM
@[sho](/user/show/10023118) Same here! My discord is helloiz
KP
11/14/23, 10:54 AM
Enjoying this and the premise. Hope to see more!
11/13/23, 5:19 PM
I've been checking back for years, I hope it's not in vain. Your stories are the only reason I visit the site. They are the absolute best. If you ever quit here, I guess I'd just want to know so I'm not hoping for nothing.

11/14/23, 6:14 AM
@[HusbandFirst](/user/show/2436468) Thanks for your continued support and faith in me. I've not gone away, but definitely sorry for having left you guys hanging for so long! I've finally been back on a bit of a writing spree in recent days so I've made quite a bit of progress on the next bit of this series. My plan is to try and complete the last remaining bits I have on mind for this series so I can have a complete wrap up before posting them again and not have to left it hanging anymore. Please be patient and stay tuned as I'll certainly be finishing this one. Thanks again! :pray::wink:

11/14/23, 10:20 AM
@[tomozco](/user/show/13902) So happy that you've had this pocket of time and been reinspired. Love your writing!
11/14/23, 10:08 AM
Hi AvionneX, thank you so much for this chapter! Thank you also for adding very hot complementary images to the series! I have always liked your story about Brad (now I like his pictures too), but I wanna point out that the pictures of Chad you provided in chapter 2 is very hot! All other pictures are great too of course, especially the ones including collar. Thanks again AvionneX!
Anonymous
11/13/23, 10:54 AM
Ahh, Hero-Slave! I love it(even if it's a little redundant :wink:)! It looks like Henry's on the path to becoming the best version of himself, but that path is still fraught with obstacles and danger. For one thing, I think it's safe to say that the people Sarah works for are probably not much better than Tri-Hard, even if they're nominally the "good guys." And besides, FreeDog has already shown us what being the good guy gets you: a one-way ticket to pup city! Henry's desire to emulate his father is an admirable one, and an important first step, but he has to be *more* than his father -- more than "Duty Boy," or even "Mister Freedom" -- if he wants to prevail. Poor Nick would probably be able to help with that...if he wasn't still so wracked with guilt over "messing everything up." Part of me wonders if there isn't some underlying insecurity there, something that perhaps even predates his relationship with Henry. It'd be awful if someone tried to take advantage of that insecurity to get to him -- y'know, someone really petty, who loves to tear others down...they might use it to convince him he really *is* just some random sick pervert, way out of his depth. Nick would be doomed if that happened. After all, it's not like being degraded and forced to submit for once might actually be a *learning* experience. And it's not like there's someone who might feel duty-bound to heal his psyche and would expend Herculean willpower and ingenuity to do it -- someone who could remind him of the virtues of greed and depravity, of kindness hidden within cruelty. Er...right? So all of that *definitely shouldn't* happen. As for things that definitely *should* happen, I second wanting to see more of the rubberized cops. I also wouldn't say no to more Travis and Hank. The latter in particular is interesting because he seems to be a much better manipulator/"psychologist" than Tri-Hard. Nick could probably learn a thing or two from him. Oh, and more kinky uses of TK! I'm almost embarrassed to admit how blind I was to its potential before seeing you use it so creatively here, but I'm a total convert now! And speaking of TK, I agree Henry will need some sort of boost to match the new threat posed by the "supercharged" FreeDog's abilities. The improved serum is an obvious answer, but I'm skeptical for a couple reasons -- the biggest being that it feels like thematically, Henry and Nick's greatest strength is their unique bond, so leaning too hard on the usual chemicals-and-technology feels a little dissonant.

11/13/23, 11:34 AM
@Anonymous Glad you're enjoying things so much! And you're right; it would be _awful_ if something like that happened with Nick! A few people have brought up the Hank/**Tri-Hard** comparison and, yes, once again you're right on this one! **Tri-Hard** has spent his life mastering and controlling machines and drones, but Hank has done the same with people,... their differences might start to shine through soon enough! As far as the TK stuff goes, I'm afraid that's my limit! I consider myself to have a wide pallet for kinks, but I don't feel it with TK. That said, I'm kinda hung-up on the image I have going here so that's not the end of the brain-draining toilets! On the other hand, stay tuned for the rubber cop squad ;)

Anonymous
11/14/23, 3:12 AM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) Whaaaat? You mean, you awakened this new fetish, and now you're just going to leave me high and dry?! This is unacceptable! You owe me restitution! I demand to see Henry properly encased in a full rubber suit, or Nick making use of his athletic skills to wrestle someone into submission(and preferably both)!

11/14/23, 8:43 AM
@Anonymous We'll just have to see about that ;)