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11/13/23, 2:54 AM
So much more rubber coming! So many muscle hunks getting a change of wardrobe. Absolutely looking forward to that. Or how these bigger guys respond to Travis being their new boss. Or how Hank trains them. Yet it definitely seems it is being setup for Travis and Henry to become the newest rivals. A kinky villian and a kinky hero, what could go wrong? Henry is going to need his own power up if he is going to get a chance. Though he does seem to have finally reconciled with his two selves to become something more. It feels like that will be both awkward and well...kinky as a hero. Just how much 'professionalism' will he be able to maintain? Yet it still seems that Nick is the linchpin to all this. Henry's weakness and strength. He serves as Henry's anchor and controller. Both his purpose and drive. So how will Nick be protected? Or how will he play a part in the fight to come without being sidelined or a liability? Though I do have one 'criticism'. Tell me if I am wrong but the pup has a 'permanent' rubber tube in his mouth/throat that the squeak toy rests in. How was the pup able to talk even with the toy removed? Though that brief conversation definitely raises some interesting questions in where that goes.

11/13/23, 9:49 AM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) Thank you once again! And, as usual, you're spot on with your assessment of the dynamics here! Nick's 'role' going forward as Henry gets back on his feet is something to think about. Meanwhile, Travis' relationship with his fellow soldiers is changing quite dramatically, and not just with Hank,... And, yes, well noticed with the mix-up there! To provide an answer for clarity; the 'tube' in **FreeDog's** mouth was only firm during insertion due to pressure being applied. Once fitted it's more like a balloon and, in this situation (with the toy removed), **FreeDog** was able to push it out of the way with his tongue so he could speak. Once the toy was slotted back in, the sleeve stretched back out to fill his mouth again _just how he likes it_. I completely forgot to properly explain, but I doubt Travis understands or cares how it worked.

11/13/23, 5:58 PM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) And your welcome! I suspect there will be some shifts in power dynamics in the coming chapter or two through a web of characters and how one will affect the others. Or how one will exert their existing authority to subvert attempts by others. Such as Travis is now the 'Best Soldier', but he is till just a soldier and slave to Tri-hard. So even if he gets his own team, it would be ideal for Hank to still keep him in chastity. He is still a 'boy' after all. And thanks for clarifying that with our favorite pup. Makes me wonder what kind of conversation he and Henry may have later on. If the pup can still recognize his old name, what else can he still recall?

11/14/23, 8:43 AM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) Don't worry, Travis isn't getting let out of his life as a smooth, cockless rubber-boy,... at least not for long!
11/14/23, 5:47 AM
"But then, a horrible car accident occurred killing many hot jocks, as the driver, also hypnotized, had all his attention stolen by his master's words, instead of the road." Jokes aside, great chapter. In fact, as I didn't comment on the last chapter, I must say it was wonderful. If chapter 13 had a good introduction/conversion to Captain Jenkins, here it shows his total decline into a humble slave. These hot macho men look so cute when they are totally submissive and obedient, don't they? Another point that I'm really enjoying is Cody: I was starting to think that Cody was losing prominence after his conversion, as he wasn't as useful as Dexter's other slaves, like the Bauers, Rich (mainly) and now Coach Jenkins, but since the last chapter you highlighted him again and my favorite part of this chapter was the friendship developement between Rich and Cody. It was very sexy and strangely cute at the same time. But now we have Josh and from what I've seen, he's going to suffer at the hands of his master. Now that Dexter has a whole team of hot guys at his disposal, I can't wait to see his profiles. And Josh taking severe punishment from all of them will be delightful to see. PS: What Dexter said about the Chad's "declaration of love" in Chapter 12? Two chapters have passed and I'm still curious to know Dexter's reaction.
3/31/23, 7:50 AM
:skull: how did Dusk figure out that Jamie was still aroused from last night and directly at that time to send the Grindr Message :skull:

11/14/23, 4:08 AM
@[temporaryhotsaucetofu](/user/show/10034005) I kinda wondered that myself. The best answer I've come to is just intuition, and knowing Jamie.
11/13/23, 7:04 PM
This was super hot! I am a bit sad that Hendrick didnt get gangbanged though lol. Imagine if all the partygoers burst in right as they finished fucking each other and then having their way with the brothers for the rest of the night, would be insanely hot.

11/14/23, 3:30 AM
@[Somerandomscreenname](/user/show/10010302) I like the way you think! :wink:
time-to-occur
11/14/23, 1:12 AM
I really enjoyed the deep dive into the lore of Fractured and the manufacturing of HIMBOs. I'm super curious to see what happens next. So far it's been almost wholesome, but these two definitely aren't where they're supposed to be!

11/14/23, 1:30 AM
@time-to-occur Exactly!
Hypno-boy
11/14/23, 12:26 AM
Catholic priests are not allowed to marry, so he wouldn't have a wife or kids. You're confusing the different religions. Protestant ministers can marry, but they aren't priests and they aren't called 'father,' they're called 'Reverend.'

11/14/23, 12:32 AM
@[Hypno-boy](/user/show/10023526) Eh, the Jesus crowd has too many franchises to count, and I don't have the mental fortitude to learn more about their lore and policies. That said, I do admit that 86ing the wife/kids would make things simpler on my end and not continuing a trend I've seemed to have developed in my writings. So I think I'll go back and pull that. Thanks :3
Nov 11, 2023
11/13/23, 11:42 PM
I really enjoyed this! It was very sweet and like other readers have said, I loved the little touch of the things that were already true not disappearing. Nicely done!
Anonymous
11/13/23, 11:31 PM
Hopefully another chapter soon
mic
11/13/23, 10:13 PM
fucking hot ideas, please more, great
11/13/23, 10:05 PM
Glad to see you back at work with this series. No apologies are needed for taking time away from writing and the technological hiccups; we understand completely that life can get in the way. I definitely liked this one and the scout uniform as punishment evolving into the police uniform. I enjoy the way you're able to develop this story and the various attires in different ways. Again, glad to see you back at work and l look forward to the next part of the story.