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11/13/23, 7:04 PM
This was super hot! I am a bit sad that Hendrick didnt get gangbanged though lol. Imagine if all the partygoers burst in right as they finished fucking each other and then having their way with the brothers for the rest of the night, would be insanely hot.

11/14/23, 3:30 AM
@[Somerandomscreenname](/user/show/10010302) I like the way you think! :wink:
time-to-occur
11/14/23, 1:12 AM
I really enjoyed the deep dive into the lore of Fractured and the manufacturing of HIMBOs. I'm super curious to see what happens next. So far it's been almost wholesome, but these two definitely aren't where they're supposed to be!

11/14/23, 1:30 AM
@time-to-occur Exactly!
Hypno-boy
11/14/23, 12:26 AM
Catholic priests are not allowed to marry, so he wouldn't have a wife or kids. You're confusing the different religions. Protestant ministers can marry, but they aren't priests and they aren't called 'father,' they're called 'Reverend.'

11/14/23, 12:32 AM
@[Hypno-boy](/user/show/10023526) Eh, the Jesus crowd has too many franchises to count, and I don't have the mental fortitude to learn more about their lore and policies. That said, I do admit that 86ing the wife/kids would make things simpler on my end and not continuing a trend I've seemed to have developed in my writings. So I think I'll go back and pull that. Thanks :3
Nov 11, 2023
11/13/23, 11:42 PM
I really enjoyed this! It was very sweet and like other readers have said, I loved the little touch of the things that were already true not disappearing. Nicely done!
Anonymous
11/13/23, 11:31 PM
Hopefully another chapter soon
mic
11/13/23, 10:13 PM
fucking hot ideas, please more, great
11/13/23, 10:05 PM
Glad to see you back at work with this series. No apologies are needed for taking time away from writing and the technological hiccups; we understand completely that life can get in the way. I definitely liked this one and the scout uniform as punishment evolving into the police uniform. I enjoy the way you're able to develop this story and the various attires in different ways. Again, glad to see you back at work and l look forward to the next part of the story.
11/9/23, 4:58 PM
This start was incredible. Frankly, I've never liked the "religious man being punished for gay revenge" premise as it's usually too dilettante and one-sided, but here it worked well enough. Not to mention that the means used for mind control is simple, and honestly I think it's very good, sometimes that's what I want to see (recently, many writers have been appearing with very complex means of mind control or who narrate their point of view in a very exquisite, which unfortunately I'm not always willing to read). I really liked what I saw so far, looking forward to part 2. PS: "Yes, My son". Please don't take it away. My dick got hard every time I imagined a sexy daddy saying that.

11/13/23, 9:54 PM
@[Sexcrab](/user/show/10027159) Thank you so much for the very kind words ^w^ I’m very happy you enjoyed this, but I do have a couple of questions. Like, what do you mean by most stories like this are ‘one-sided and dilettante’? I’ve looked up the definition several times, and I STILL can’t wrap my head around it; and if I was lucky enough to avoid that folly, I’d like to know how you mean so I can stay on that side of the rail again. I had a couple of notions as to where I might take the direction of this short story, but I keep second guessing myself and it’s slowing me down. I want to get a feel for what might fly here and which ideas I should shelve, if you don’t mind o3o
mic
11/13/23, 9:39 PM
fucking hot story , strip them more of money and their clothes, let them only hold smaller allowance and take more of their cash, so they work more and harder
11/10/23, 12:22 PM
Love these updates I do have to ask. Can the Djinn not hypnotize other men like he does Sanjay? Or is it cause he rubbed the lamp? Cause Quintin pinging and smiling sounds quiet hot

11/10/23, 9:56 PM
@[HypnoJ](/user/show/974897) Djinn is only able to hypnotize Sanjay because yes, he did summon him from the lamp. Djinn is able to enchant, influence, and even possess other men whenever he wants, but hypnosis is something only for the carrier of the lamp.

11/12/23, 1:21 AM
@[NewsScene](/user/show/270454) As I thought Thanks for the clarification

Mind Bender
11/13/23, 8:16 PM
@[HypnoJ](/user/show/974897) I agree that would be amazing!

Anonymous
11/13/23, 8:22 PM
@[NewsScene](/user/show/270454) Love that their are rules to the lamp and how the influence work. You're a very good writer.