Recent Comments

11/9/23, 4:58 PM
This start was incredible. Frankly, I've never liked the "religious man being punished for gay revenge" premise as it's usually too dilettante and one-sided, but here it worked well enough. Not to mention that the means used for mind control is simple, and honestly I think it's very good, sometimes that's what I want to see (recently, many writers have been appearing with very complex means of mind control or who narrate their point of view in a very exquisite, which unfortunately I'm not always willing to read). I really liked what I saw so far, looking forward to part 2. PS: "Yes, My son". Please don't take it away. My dick got hard every time I imagined a sexy daddy saying that.

11/13/23, 9:54 PM
@[Sexcrab](/user/show/10027159) Thank you so much for the very kind words ^w^ I’m very happy you enjoyed this, but I do have a couple of questions. Like, what do you mean by most stories like this are ‘one-sided and dilettante’? I’ve looked up the definition several times, and I STILL can’t wrap my head around it; and if I was lucky enough to avoid that folly, I’d like to know how you mean so I can stay on that side of the rail again. I had a couple of notions as to where I might take the direction of this short story, but I keep second guessing myself and it’s slowing me down. I want to get a feel for what might fly here and which ideas I should shelve, if you don’t mind o3o
mic
11/13/23, 9:39 PM
fucking hot story , strip them more of money and their clothes, let them only hold smaller allowance and take more of their cash, so they work more and harder
11/10/23, 12:22 PM
Love these updates I do have to ask. Can the Djinn not hypnotize other men like he does Sanjay? Or is it cause he rubbed the lamp? Cause Quintin pinging and smiling sounds quiet hot

11/10/23, 9:56 PM
@[HypnoJ](/user/show/974897) Djinn is only able to hypnotize Sanjay because yes, he did summon him from the lamp. Djinn is able to enchant, influence, and even possess other men whenever he wants, but hypnosis is something only for the carrier of the lamp.

11/12/23, 1:21 AM
@[NewsScene](/user/show/270454) As I thought Thanks for the clarification

Mind Bender
11/13/23, 8:16 PM
@[HypnoJ](/user/show/974897) I agree that would be amazing!

Anonymous
11/13/23, 8:22 PM
@[NewsScene](/user/show/270454) Love that their are rules to the lamp and how the influence work. You're a very good writer.
5/21/19, 2:45 AM
Sorry this story is a bit of a tease! It was really more me fucking around as a vehicle for discussing a sensitive topic and I wanted to get it out of my head. Maybe next time I'll go through with it. Or write a sequel. We'll see.

Anonymous
11/13/23, 6:49 PM
@[The Meaner Nook](/user/show/449300) So the whole arguement could honestly be solved with CNC being part of making the serum work. It doesn’t work unless you consent to getting orders. A rabbit hole possibility, but the being made into pedophiles isn’t a far off idea. It’s highly plausible.
Nov 11, 2023
11/13/23, 5:22 PM
Love the chav, socks, trainers vibe. Keep up the good work!

11/13/23, 6:39 PM
@[icandestroy](/user/show/914356) Thank you :)
11/13/23, 5:47 PM
This slow, edging eroticism was perfectly done. Absolutely astoundingly good.
11/13/23, 4:07 PM
Great story. Love the transformation from Thomas to Tommy to Officer T. :purple_heart: I did get a little confused in the transformation to Officer Freewill between Tommy & Adrian.
11/13/23, 3:55 PM
Great descriptions!
RYC
11/13/23, 3:48 PM
Please continue this story line.
11/13/23, 1:57 PM
This story is so well written. I enjoy the build-up. I love the cum. THANK YOU for your excellent writing.